Need writer for loving wife story

[MikeyLikesIt05]

I want someone to take my thoughts and write a story for me. The story is about a husband that has been trying to add spice to their sex life. The wife seems to like the idea of fucking another man and bringing sloppy seconds home to husband. But she is afraid to take it from fantasy to real life.

So the story goes that the husband convinces the wife to go to a hotel bar, meet a man and tell him that her husband’s plane is delayed and won’t be in until late tonight. The husband is the bar watching from a distance. Eventually the wife and man go up to her room and have sex (need good description of what they do while fucking). After they are done with sex, the wife gets a text saying husband is on his way to hotel and man has to leave. Maybe husband has been in adjoining room the whole time in case the wife needed help. Once man leaves, husband comes into wife’s room, strips naked and slides his already hard cock into her used pussy and comes in a few strokes.

I can provide more background and details I would like included but that’s a good idea of what I am looking for.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

You got all the points there, just expand on them and write it yourself. So far so good.

 

[jaF0]

That's such a common theme there are probably hundreds, if not thousands of those stories here.

 

[NikiVien]

Out of interest, how much are you offering for this job?

 

[MikeyLikesIt05]

Out of interest, how much are you offering for this job?

Ummm nothing. I don’t think most authors on this site do it for the money.

Of course the story would belong to the author.

 

[jaF0]

By the way, the ad never said that.

It said, 'He likes it, Hey Mikey!!!'

 

[Zeb_Carter]

By the way, the ad never said that.

It said, 'He likes it, Hey Mikey!!!'

What? I know what you are talking about, but what thread were you look for to post it?

 

[gunhilltrain]

That's such a common theme there are probably hundreds, if not thousands of those stories here.

So what, almost everything on here has been done before. It's a matter of how it's done.

Mikey, you've been here for sixteen years and you haven't published anything yet. It's time for you to test the waters.

You already have the plot. Where in Ohio are you? Pick a swanky hotel in some town you know, and set it there. Don't overdo it, but give it a sense of place. Try to imagine what the couple looks like and give some bit of background about their lives, how long they've been together, and so forth. Try to make the pick-up in the bar plausible; what do they say to each other? Is that guy younger or older than the woman?

What do the husband and wife do after the final sex act? Are they a bit stunned, are they joyous, or what? You've already got everything you need. I'd do it myself, but the plot is not really my thing and I've got other stories in the works. And I wouldn't put it in the Loving Wives category as shark bait.

 

[Brick1950]

No contact information

If don't turn on your Pm don't expect any help t

 

[jaF0]

What? I know what you are talking about, but what thread were you look for to post it?

Considering the OPs chosen name ....

 

[Zeb_Carter]

Considering the OPs chosen name ....

Ah... yes, I see that now.

 

[MikeyLikesIt05]

So what, almost everything on here has been done before. It's a matter of how it's done.

Mikey, you've been here for sixteen years and you haven't published anything yet. It's time for you to test the waters.

You already have the plot. Where in Ohio are you? Pick a swanky hotel in some town you know, and set it there. Don't overdo it, but give it a sense of place. Try to imagine what the couple looks like and give some bit of background about their lives, how long they've been together, and so forth. Try to make the pick-up in the bar plausible; what do they say to each other? Is that guy younger or older than the woman?

What do the husband and wife do after the final sex act? Are they a bit stunned, are they joyous, or what? You've already got everything you need. I'd do it myself, but the plot is not really my thing and I've got other stories in the works. And I wouldn't put it in the Loving Wives category as shark bait.

Thx for the encouragement. I’ve tried writing and it’s harder than all the anonymous haters think.

I guess I’ll have to try because I get mostly dumb ass replies like from Jafo who just wants to hear himself talk instead of being helpful.

 

[MikeyLikesIt05]

If don't turn on your Pm don't expect any help t

Someone could offer help in a post first! Gotta protect my PMs from people like jafo!

 

[Hypoxia]

Thx for the encouragement. I’ve tried writing and it’s harder than all the anonymous haters think.

Many LIT authors can't write, but they write anyway. Soar above them!

Various approaches to writing fiction exist. Try one of these:

• Invent a setting and characters, maybe add a few plot points, and set the players free to create your story for you.
• Use a plot (could be from a diary or existing tale) as a sculptor's armature. Slap-on or shave-off clay (words) till you're satisfied.
• Get high and write stream-of-consciousness. Edit when sober.

 

[Brick1950]

Who is Jofo ???

Sounds like he would make a good super villain !!

 

[gunhilltrain]

Thx for the encouragement. I’ve tried writing and it’s harder than all the anonymous haters think.

I guess I’ll have to try because I get mostly dumb ass replies like from Jafo who just wants to hear himself talk instead of being helpful.

It gets easier - or I should say more satisfying - the more you do it. I first wrote some essays for a college newspaper over forty-five years ago. (The weird thing is that the college recently scanned everything for an online archive and I can read it all again.) Then I didn't write anything until the early 2000s when I tried my hand at screenplays. A good way to practice dialogue, but they were far too long.

Then around 2017, I tried prose fiction and a few more essays, and I started posting them online. Thus, here I am. But I'm sixty-six now, so I follow my own muse.

 

[Jay142]

Someone could offer help in a post first! Gotta protect my PMs from people like jafo!

I might want to give it a shot. I'm finishing up one story and going on vacation so I wouldn't be able to start for a couple of weeks. Read some of my stuff and see if you like my style. I have written stories for other husbands before such as Jill, Jo, Cathy, Melissa, Lei, and a few others.

I'd expect your help in writing it but let me know. No promises but we can talk

 

[MikeyLikesIt05]

I might want to give it a shot. I'm finishing up one story and going on vacation so I wouldn't be able to start for a couple of weeks. Read some of my stuff and see if you like my style. I have written stories for other husbands before such as Jill, Jo, Cathy, Melissa, Lei, and a few others.

I'd expect your help in writing it but let me know. No promises but we can talk

Thanks Jay. I’ll read some of your stuff and let you know.

Have a good vacation!

 

[Andrew1968]

It seems like you have a writer who is willing to work on this with you – good stuff. I’m just offering some personal thoughts on the story idea.

I like some of the ideas around this story. I can definitely see a beautiful, elegantly dressed wife in an up-market hotel bar. I can see her there drinking and waiting. She makes herself available to a wealthy, handsome older man. Yes, she allows herself to be seduced and taken upstairs to a room, which she has booked for the night. They fuck.

The wife’s husband should be there. The husband could be in the bar and later in the hotel room; or he could have set up cameras and audio devices around the hotel room and is watching/listening remotely from another location.

The husband should join the wife once the wealthy, handsome older man leaves the wife, and the husband should then re-claim her.

I would be tempted to complicate the plot somewhat. Maybe the husband can get his wife to agree to place an advertisement in the Adult Services section of a newspaper or in some other place. The wife can offer “services” for money. She should charge a high rate in order to attract the sort of wealthy, older man she eventually beds in the hotel room. To be clear, the wife and her husband are apparently doing this i.e., placing the ad, for the thrill of it and so she can sleep with someone else, just the once...

Of course, however, the wife and the husband quickly become addicted to this game and the wife continues to offer “services” to wealthy, older men and the husband continues to re-claim her.

The story, I think would then need to describe how this wife, who I think secretly longs to be a beautiful, high-class courtesan, finally can do this with a compliant, excited husband.

And further just to complicate the plot even more. The older, wealthy man the wife’s meets in the hotel bar and who has answered her advertisement for “services” can be someone she knows, such as her husband’s boss, her husband’s father or some other person of that sort.

This meeting of two people – in a hotel bar - who know each other would be no mere coincidence. The wife let’s this person know that it is her who is offering the “services” via the advertisement. She encourages the man to take her up on the offer. He of course does. The wife can then fulfill a fantasy she has always had to be with this man. The husband meanwhile is shocked, but more turned on than even he expected he would be, watching his wife with this other man he knows so well...

The wife can set things up, so the re-claiming sex, between the husband and wife, would be amazing and intense.

 

[Hypoxia]

Not that some don't exist IRL but I find it difficult to believe a hubby telling wifey to fuck a stranger so the couple's sex life is "spiced up", not unless hubby already has fresh fucks awaiting him and/or is setting-up a divorce or murder.

I'll believe that a couple will go trio with a close male friend, or a couple will swing with another couple, also close friends, because I've seen such. I've not seen couples picking-up strangers but that makes a fun fantasy trope, hey?

I wrote an entertaining fantasy of hubbies, powerful but seeking humiliation, watching from concealment as wives screw a stranger, but I'm just feeding reader fetishes. Watching openly is IMHO even more fetishistic. Writing of full-on wimps (willing cucks) will certainly gain negative attention from LW trolls.

To avoid LW reader hatred, throw in revenge. BtB= Burn the Bitch / Bastard. Maybe infuse one of the parties with an awful disease or impending criminal proceedings. Somebody's gotta suffer!

 

[sirhugs]

Not that some don't exist IRL but I find it difficult to believe a hubby telling wifey to fuck a stranger so the couple's sex life is "spiced up", not unless hubby already has fresh fucks awaiting him and/or is setting-up a divorce or murder.

I'll believe that a couple will go trio with a close male friend, or a couple will swing with another couple, also close friends, because I've seen such. I've not seen couples picking-up strangers but that makes a fun fantasy trope, hey?

I wrote an entertaining fantasy of hubbies, powerful but seeking humiliation, watching from concealment as wives screw a stranger, but I'm just feeding reader fetishes. Watching openly is IMHO even more fetishistic. Writing of full-on wimps (willing cucks) will certainly gain negative attention from LW trolls.

To avoid LW reader hatred, throw in revenge. BtB= Burn the Bitch / Bastard. Maybe infuse one of the parties with an awful disease or impending criminal proceedings. Somebody's gotta suffer!

there will always be LW reader hatred.

 

[Todd55016]

I want someone to take my thoughts and write a story for me. The story is about a husband that has been trying to add spice to their sex life. The wife seems to like the idea of fucking another man and bringing sloppy seconds home to husband. But she is afraid to take it from fantasy to real life.

So the story goes that the husband convinces the wife to go to a hotel bar, meet a man and tell him that her husband’s plane is delayed and won’t be in until late tonight. The husband is the bar watching from a distance. Eventually the wife and man go up to her room and have sex (need good description of what they do while fucking). After they are done with sex, the wife gets a text saying husband is on his way to hotel and man has to leave. Maybe husband has been in adjoining room the whole time in case the wife needed help. Once man leaves, husband comes into wife’s room, strips naked and slides his already hard cock into her used pussy and comes in a few strokes.

I can provide more background and details I would like included but that’s a good idea of what I am looking for.

 

[Todd55016]

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