Need Specialized Feedback

[R. Richard]

I am asking for some specialized review of my story sequence 'Tails Of The Pussycat Lounge.' The story is basically that of a former rich/suddenly poor girl who goes to work in a nudie/strip bar to survive.

What I am looking for is someone who has actually worked in such an establishment to review my bar environment description for glaring errors. I do not need the whole sequence read, just a couple of chapters. I used to own a night club (no nudie/strip type action). I suspect that The Pussycat Lounge is a bit over the top, but not too far out. I am asking for help and a PM response in confidence. TIA.

I am posting this in both Story Feedback and Author's Hangout. I am not asking for a story review, just a check on the little world I am describing.

Links to the chapters follow.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=174527

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=174712

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=174855

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=175009

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=175217

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=175341

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=175588

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=175645

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=175873

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=175973

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=177949

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=178366

R. Richard

 

[Songcatcher]

Veryverygood!