Need someone to help with my first story

[dbrains]

I have a story written and have done about as much damage as I can do to it. I need someone to help me with advice, corrections, or whatever is appropriate. This could be anything from 'round file it' to some constructive suggestions. I just can't objectively look at my own first piece and know whether it is total crap or worth going forward with.

The story is about an over sexed couple who are having problems with static electricity. It is about 2600 words. MS Word doesn't complain about it too much, and not really sure about punctuation. If I told you how long it has been since I was taught grammar, you'd realize I could replace the 'over 18' with a much larger number. I'm not overly concerned with that unless it is going to detract from the story.

If any of you have time to take on a noob with a story of unknown quality, let me know. I will send the volunteer a copy and see where it goes.

BTW, after trying this, I have a lot of respect for anyone who has gone this route with good or bad results and even more for those who seem to be able to crank out a good chapter every week or two.

 

[robertreams]

About 30 stories last year. I can take a look, but prefer a full edit if that is okay. If you want me to edit PM me and I will send you my e-mail address.

 

[Hypoxia]

Let's see, 39 approved postings (and two forever rejects) in the last 34 weeks. I guess I qualify. If you don't like Bob's edit or want a second opinion, PM me.

 

[SexyOkieMom]

My First Story Attempt

I have a story written and have done about as much damage as I can do to it. I need someone to help me with advice, corrections, or whatever is appropriate. This could be anything from 'round file it' to some constructive suggestions. I just can't objectively look at my own first piece and know whether it is total crap or worth going

I have just finished my first try at a story also and need HELP too..I haven't been able to get any replies from the Find An Edition site..

 

[dbrains]

I have a story written and have done about as much damage as I can do to it. I need someone to help me with advice, corrections, or whatever is appropriate. This could be anything from 'round file it' to some constructive suggestions. I just can't objectively look at my own first piece and know whether it is total crap or worth going

I have just finished my first try at a story also and need HELP too..I haven't been able to get any replies from the Find An Edition site..

i tried the find an editor site also and selected someone i thought sounded ok, but they were too busy. they did respond so i took it as a sincere response and may try them again later, assuming my first effort is not a complete disaster.

it seems like you get better responses on this forum. maybe it is too easy to list as an editor so a lot of people do. people you encounter on this site are actually active.

hang in there. seems like there are a number of people willing to help.

 

[Todger65]

I have just finished my first try at a story also and need HELP too..I haven't been able to get any replies from the Find An Edition site..

It does help us when you post here for an editor, to give an idea of the story content including the category you intend to publish the story in. That way you are more likely to get someone who is willing to help you.

 

[SexyOkieMom]

First time

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[SexyOkieMom]

First time

2.18 year old bf girls that fall in love with 2 college athletes.. Have sex after no sex and being neglected for days has sex with bf best friend who has the hots for her and with bf approval..

 

[dbrains]

I have an editor

For those of you who read my post and those who offered help, my thanks.

Not sure how long it will take to follow my editors advice so there may be some delay before I can submit my story.

 

[SexyOkieMom]

Editor

For those of you who read my post and those who offered help, my thanks.

Not sure how long it will take to follow my editors advice so there may be some delay before I can submit my story.

Same here but we 're working on it he likes the story line ..