Need some possible help (old thread)

[need_help]

Okay so in my story a girls going to high school for the first time she looks over on the bus and sees another girl in the seat opposite her. Now this girl is your average 5'6" girl but when she nodded at the girl she saw her feet were huge like size 14. I think I need help with the description.

Heres what I'm thinking about posting, slightly altered of course to protect the names lol:

Sara looked over at the person seated across from her who had gotten on at the last stop and smiled at her. She smiled back. Sara went back to looking out the window but not before looking at the girls feet, her eyes were like saucers as she had to take a second look then quickly looking back out the window hoping the girl didn't notice her staring. She had never seen a girl with such big feet she must be a man or something.

A few moments after the bus got moving again she felt a slight bump on her seat and there they were, Sara couldn't help but stare at them now. "Fourteen," (LOL got told a few times not to use ...) the girl said as Sara looked up, the girl had crossed her legs and was holding a pair of sandals (or flip flops) in her hand. "That was going to be your 'first' question right?"

Sara nodded and swallowed hard. This girl had more than a few pedicures in her life that was obvious. Each foot was long and thick despite the girls body type, she wasn't fat but she wasn't thin either. Her heels were bright pink and her toes looked like long fingers with thick nails on the end but they had bright red pant on them so that might explain the girth of each nail. As the girl wiggled her toes. Sara could see a space between the big and the second toe. "They, uh, they look nice." She muttered as she went back to looking out the window.

The girl sounded a little annoyed. "Yea, yea. This is just the way god made me and is uniquely {first and last name here}."

Sorry its kinda late here and I'm not going to make up names right now.

 

[Hypoxia]

Possibly more significant that foot LENGTH is foot WIDTH. CV: I'm from a tall bigfoot family. Mom was only 5'9" and wore 9A. Dad was 6'1" wearing 11EEEEE. My 6'1" sister wears 11B; my 6'5" brother wears 17C. (I won't mention my own.) Dad's shorter but wider feet 'looked' larger than my brother's longer, narrower feet.

I won't say they don't exist, but I've never seen human toes that look like fingers. Most feet AFAIK will have longer tarsals than metatarsals -- that's where a foot is elongated. I *have* seen a foot on a man about 6' tall that must have been 20EEEEEEEE -- his shoes were very wide, almost like enclosing cartoon duck feet. His toes were short and stubby.

Hmmm, have you googled WOMEN LARGE FEET and looked at images? Such might help with your description. G'luck!

 

[MyRubiLips]

Possibly more significant that foot LENGTH is foot WIDTH. CV: I'm from a tall bigfoot family. Mom was only 5'9" and wore 9A. My 6'1" sister wears 11B...

I've only heard of "M" for medium width and "W" for wide in women's sizes; 6 - 12 for length.

 

[DirtyAllie]

I would treat this the way I like to see tits and cock size described, a little vague. The more detail you try to give the more difficult it is.

"She had the biggest, longest feet I'd ever seen, her toes easily as long as some peoples fingers." can be enough.

"But in spite of their size they were still quite feminine, the toes, red and obviously manicured and the soles of her feet pink and healthy looking.....

something along those lines.

 

[Hypoxia]

I've only heard of "M" for medium width and "W" for wide in women's sizes; 6 - 12 for length.

[Engage brain & memory before writing.]

I mentally translated Mom's 'narrow' as A. And Sis mostly wears men's athletic shoes -- I just checked, she says 11C now. Feet spread with age. Damn.

I would treat this the way I like to see tits and cock size described, a little vague. The more detail you try to give the more difficult it is.

Quite right. IMHO it's best to avoid specifying 'exact' sizes of bras, cocks, shoes, trousers, hats, heights, etc -- unless those tell the story of body changes.

 

[need_help]

lol, okay this is why I'm here looking for help. Okay not the reason why I set up the account but isn't it nice when things work out. sorry they got no edit here anymore so I can't bold the selected writings and its like 2am here so getting a little tired

Okay:

Hmmm, have you googled WOMEN LARGE FEET and looked at images? Such might help with your description. G'luck!

*** Thanks and yes I did goggle 'the foot' was surprised that unlike the fingers, (index ring middle wedding and little) the foot only has two names big and little toe. Than 'womens feet' saw a few with little 'nubs' for toes I think is what people say. Then larger ones with the space between the big toe and 2nd.

I won't say they don't exist, but I've never seen human toes that look like fingers.

*** Hmm yea, guess I could just put 'long toes' but that seems so lazy. I think that writing is like panting a picture the more detail you put in the better the story.

Possibly more significant that foot LENGTH is foot WIDTH

*** Ah okay so I should put foot was long 'wide' and thick?

But in spite of their size they were still quite feminine, the toes, red and obviously manicured and the soles of her feet pink and healthy looking.....

***Hmm okay then that helps a little I'll make the changes than post up whats new.

 

[litmlove]

You don't make it clear, so it sounds like you have a 5'6 girl with clown feet :S

Feet play an important part of balance, the feet are proportional to the height of the person. But I don't think you meant a clown-feet person.

I think you are trying to convey the sense that there is a girl with a woman who is much larger than herself. Like a child with an adult or something. So I suppose you should use relative descriptions like her small hands gripping her foot.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Foot

 

[need_help]

Ah okay, I'll just make her a little taller or not mention the height and let the reader figure it out?

 

[need_help]

Sara looked over at the person seated across from her who had gotten on at the last stop and smiled at her. She smiled back. Sara went back to looking out the window but not before glancing at the girls feet, her eyes were like saucers as she had to take a second look then quickly looking back out the window hoping the girl didn't notice her staring. She had never seen a girl with such big feet thinking that she must be a man or something.

A few moments after the bus got moving again she felt a slight bump on her seat and there they were, Sara couldn't help but stare at them now. "Fourteen," the girl said as Sara looked up. The girl had crossed her legs, she was tall leaning against the bus wall and was holding a pair of huge sandals in her hand. "That was going to be your 'first' question right?"

Sara nodded and swallowed hard. This girl had more than a few pedicures in her life that was obvious. Each foot was long, wide and thick despite the girls body type, she wasn't fat but she wasn't pencil thin either, she did have some meat on her bones. But in spite of their size they were still quite feminine, the long toes, red and obviously pedicured. The soles of her feet pink and healthy looking. As the girl wiggled her toes. Sara could see a space between the big and the second toe. "They, uh, they look nice." She muttered as she went back to looking out the window then down at her own small feet. She always hated that her feet looked so small but didn't realize it until she had her first age appropriate sneakers. Through out grade school she and her parents had been buying her shoes in the children shoe section, her parents always said it was a little less expensive to buy them there. She had always just shrugged it off that she had strawberry short cake or poke-a-dots on her shoes. She always thought she had her own style and was some how happy with it.

The girl sounded a little annoyed. "Yea, yea. This is just the way god made me and is uniquely {first and last name here}."