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Please click my link and le tme know what you think of my poetry. Honest useful criticism only. Thanks
 
Looking at the feedback for you new poem, Sophia Jane, it appears you got tons of praise. :)
I thought it was too much burning, blazing, torching. You have to be careful of how you use those words in an erotic poem. They tend to be very cliché.
 
Dndjsp said:
How much poetry do you read, Dndjsp? And I don't mean just here.

Frankly, your use of language is very predictable. But you can't know that without some basis for comparison. Read some of the highly rated authors here (several poems from each), and look at some websites like Poetry Daily to get some examples of what other writers are doing in poetry. Read a lot, write a lot, read some more, go back and revise.

You'll get better.
 
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