Need some input...

[wifelover1980]

Anyone interested in reading the first part of a draft I have been writing? Would like some feedback on what I have so far and where to go from here. Thanks...

 

[sr71plt]

You probably will get better response if you provide the genre and the length.

 

[wifelover1980]

You probably will get better response if you provide the genre and the length.

Thanks...

I guess it'd be Loving Wives... maybe Erotic Couplings? Basically it is about an affair between a woman and another man, though what I have written so far does not include the affair stuff yet... just some lead in stuff... It is about 3700 words so far.

 

[nakdsub]

Is it a cuckold...

ie: I saw my wife with another man and my dick got hard?
or,
is a story where the hubby is truly hurt by the affair?

 

[wifelover1980]

ie: I saw my wife with another man and my dick got hard?
or,
is a story where the hubby is truly hurt by the affair?

A story where the hubby doesn't necessarily find out. It is more about the exploration that the wife does with the other man. Her transformation from doting wife to wife who falls for another man. The inner conflict she goes through, etc.

 

[nakdsub]

okay, that does sound interesting...

If you want to PM me what you have so far I would be happy to read it and offer any suggestions I could.

 

[OrdedaScoca]

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