need some help with story concept

[regularguy13]

The other week the US celebrated our independence day, the Fourth of July. There were many advertisements offering to help you" put the fourth in the 4th of July". Some offered to sell fireworks or food for get-togethers. Others invited people to attend a parade...etc.

That phrase "Put the Fourth in the Fourth" has gotten stuck in my head. I know there's a story there. I have a couple of ideas. I'd prefer not to put everything out in the forum. I'm looking for one or two people to bounce my ideas off and get some suggestions or advice.

I'm 4/5 of the way to having the story concept clear in my mind. I need that last bit.

Thanks in advance. Interested parties can private message me or email me at worldtravelerseekscompanion@gmai.com


p.s. i'll delete this thread when i have some volunteers. r

 

[regularguy13]

okay to delete

Thanks......okay to delete r

 

[ElectricBlue]

Thanks......okay to delete r

Threads don't get deleted unless they contravene site policy, which yours doesn't (except for the email address). You can go in and edit your post, deleting all the text, if you want.

 

[Hypoxia]

Old country song: I got four on the floor and a fifth under the seat. I foresee something like: It's only the Fourth and there's fifths all around me. How to put fourths in the Fourth? Sally Forth, maybe. Is that a flagpole in your pocket or are you just glad to see me?

July Fourteenth is better IMHO. Bastille Day; Iraq National Day; International Nude Day. Maybe try some confabulation of Fourth and Fourteenth, like going into a coma while patriotic and emerging nude.