need some help about an idea/story in the making

[NASCARaddicted]

Today, I started to write my first story (and this time it looks really good).

But before I get too deep into it, I want to hear some advises/opinions from you experienced guys.

The basic idea is: There is this mature teacher. She is skinny dipping in a remote lake. In the lake, there is also a (former) pupil of her (I think the story will be better if it is a former pupil).

So, first of all: If a guy is 18 years old, should I call him "pupil" or "student" ? My plan is: He just finished school (maximum 1 year ago) - so would that be college ?

As for the teacher: She is very cool and open minded. She is 54, (but she looks like 44), unmarried and single (because she wants to remain independent). She rides a Harley Davidson. I am not sure about her shape, but I think her shape is normal, but with nice big boobs (but don't forget, she is 54). She has very nice round nipples - and in both nipples, she has a piercing. Also, she has a shaven pussy. And she is open minded (she likes things like blowjobs and anal sex).

So they are both swimming in this lake. The guy didn't see how the teacher got into the water, so he doesn't know that she is nude. He is wearing a swimming trunk.

So, they talk in the lake and then they swim back to the beach. When they reach shallow water, they stand up and the guy notices that the teacher is topless and that she has pierced nipples. Then, they walk out, and the guy notices that she is totally nude, and that she is shaved. The teacher notices how surprised he is, but she has no problem with that ... she starts to talk about things like piercings (she tells him, that she is interested in a pussy piercing - maybe she will get one)

So, what do you think about this so far ?

Do you think a 54 year old single female teachers, with nipple piercing, riding a Harley Davidson would be unrealistic ? (Don't forget, when she was young (about 21), it was the year of 1969, so I guess she should be very cool)

Oh, and I need help on one word: when you are in a lake, and you make swimming movements without moving (just to keep your head over the surface) - how is that called ? I think I once heard a word like "water treading" or something like this ? Is this word correct ?
You see, as I said: The teacher and the guy meet in the middle of the lake so they stop swimming and start to talk. But if they don't move, they would drown ...

 

[sirhugs]

the term you are looking for is " treading water".

I think the premise is marginally believable. I'm curious where you intend to go with it. what happens next?

Tell me about the guy-Is he experienced? A virgin? In between? Did he have a crush on her before? Has he had feelings for mature women generally, or will this open up new feelings for him?

 

[Chicklet]

this story sounds great, nascar!

okay so I think that you should say "student" and I think she should be his senior year english teacher or something like that, making him a freshman in college.

The tricky part is getting them talking about her being naked; as a teacher, open minded or not, she's probably not going to be too comfortable with the fact that this ex-student is about to see her body.

good luck = ) = )

Chicklet

 

[sirhugs]

this story sounds great, nascar!

okay so I think that you should say "student" and I think she should be his senior year english teacher or something like that, making him a freshman in college.

The tricky part is getting them talking about her being naked; as a teacher, open minded or not, she's probably not going to be too comfortable with the fact that this ex-student is about to see her body.

good luck = ) = )

Chicklet

or maybe, she has a secret thing for him, and, being openly active as well as open minded, she is comfy with it....take your pick- either works- Chickie's might present more conflict and drama, a richer story, but, is that where you want to go?

 

[deliciously_naughty]

I think it's a totally workable premise, but you might want to do some sort of reflection on how he'd always thought she had a wild side but you never could see it in school. Many teachers have dual personalities...when I've taught, my teacher clothes are very proper as compared to my hanging out or going out clothes.

 

[sirhugs]

I think it's a totally workable premise, but you might want to do some sort of reflection on how he'd always thought she had a wild side but you never could see it in school. Many teachers have dual personalities...when I've taught, my teacher clothes are very proper as compared to my hanging out or going out clothes.

its many many moons since I was a malr student. Although I often imagined what my female teahers looked like undressed, I never once imagined they truly had a wild side......from my experience, I postulate the "surprise" of her being pierced would be good drama.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

well, my imagination of this teacher is: even back in school, all the students thought that she is cool.

I mean, a teacher (especially a female) who rides a motorbike.

Back in my school, we had this one (male) english teacher. He was also very cool. Many times he behaved like a clown (for example he juggled balls in class. In our spare time, he even instructed us about juggling balls and stucks and stuff like that.
Also, this guy was like 6" 2 (or maybe even taller) but he had the smallest cars amongst all teachers (it was a Daihatsu) ...

As for the teacher in the story: I thought about something like: In her spare time, she visits the sauna. And skinny dipping is normal for her. I guess she could be a physical education teacher. All the physical education teachers that I had so far were all very self-confident, they had no problem with showing their body. (but of course, they were never nude)

Also: As I said, the woman is used to do skinny dipping. So, after the water treading (thanks to sirhugs), they go out of the water. And since the teacher is used to do skinny dipping, she feels and behaves like usually. But then, she notices how surprised the pupil looks at her - thats when she realizes that she is standing nude in front of him. But what should she do ? She has no towel (her visit to the lake was spontaneous, she thought the rays of the sun would be enough dry her body). Of course, she could also run for cover behind some bushes - but somehow, she thinks this would be childish. They are both adults, so being nude shouldn't be a problem.

Also: Maybe she is also a history teacher. Just yesterday, she talked to the students about ancient Greece and the ancient Olympic Games. Back then, the athlets were all naked ....

Also: As I said, she is 54, and maybe chubby. So, at first, the student is not turned on by her. Maybe he is standing behind her, when they go out of the water, so he only sees her back. So for him, it's just a 54 year old nude woman. Then she turns around ... and suddenly, he sees the pierced nipples and the shaved pussy ....

And just to add: As far as I know, the sun can do "magic things". I mean, I heard that the rays of the sun can really turn you on ... so maybe she is just in a kinky mood, because of the warm rays. She always thought about having sex with a young guy. Don't forget: She has piercings in both her nipples. And she likes sex. Maybe she starts to seduce this young guy, so that she can fulfil her fantasy (having sex with a young guy).

Maybe the guy prefers young girls. So the teacher has to tease him. At first, she asks him, why he doesn't drop his swimming trunk and go nude like she does. At the same time, she is sitting/standing so that he can see her shaven pussy. So he drops his pants, and his dick is already slightly errected.

Then, they could sit together and talk about the time that has passed since the guy left school (maybe 1 - 2 years ago). Maybe the guy has a bag with things like suntan lotion. He offers the teacher some, and while they talk, the teacher starts to put some of the lotion on her breasts, and especially her nipples. So the guy get's really bold: he says something like: "Wow, I always knew that you are pretty cool. But now, when I see your pierced nipples, I see that you are VERY cool" - "Yeah, I also love this piercings, it was a good idea that I got them" (while she says this, she plays with her nipples). "And I even thought about having my vagina pierced, too ...." - "Your vagina ? Wow, that would be really cool .... " - "Yeah, but I am not quiet sure about the "where". What do you think, what would be better ? The inner labia, the outer labia, the clitoris ?" while she says this, she opens her legs, so that he can look right at her pussy."What's your opinion ?" - "I don't know. I think everything would look great on you. " ....

 

[NASCARaddicted]

besides the fact that I am replying to myself ...

what about this: the guy is also nude in the lake. At first, he is unsure, because he is nude and she is not (that's what he thinks)
or he watched her, while she entered the lake (nude) ....

or maybe he swam to the other side of the lake and removed his swimming trunks ....

Well, no matter if he know that she is nude or not. He enjoys to show his dick ...

As for the teacher, being nude: If a woman (or any person) is nude amongst clothed people, she may have a problem with that. But if she is nude amongst other nude people, it is different (I think)

 

[sirhugs]

how about he's there first????

he could be around in a cove. She arrives, strips, is about to jump in when she sees him....

 

[NASCARaddicted]

how about he's there first????

he could be around in a cove. She arrives, strips, is about to jump in when she sees him....

? did I forget to mention this ? I planed it like this from the beginning.

Maybe it could be like this: When the guy came to the lake, he hid his bag and his mountain bike behind some bushes (because he was concerned about thieves). Then he goes swimming.

Some time later, the woman arrives at the lake. She looks around, but sees no one. So she gets undressed and get's into the lake.She swims to the middle of the lake.
At the same time, the guy is swimming behind some reed.

After some time, the woman wants to swim back to the beach. Suddenly, she sees something "red", that is covered by some bushes. When she swims closer to the beach, she recognizes it as a mountain bike. It looks new. So, it seems as if she is not alone.

So, instead of swimming to the beach, she swims towards the reed, and suddenly, she sees that there is another person. At first, she is unsure - is it a friend or foe ? But then, she recognizes him. It's George, one of her former students. Back in school, he was always a nice, polite young man, he always behaved good. So, she swims over to him ... after the first surprise ("hey, it's you - I didn't expect to see you here in this remote lake ...") they start to talk about the old times, and about what happened after he left school

Then, they decide to get out of the water. While they get out, they are still talking alot, so at first they don't think about their own nudity. And once they see that the other one is also nude, it doesn't bother them very much ...

 

[sirhugs]

I think you are ready to write it