Need roughly 4400 word story edited

[influenceable]

I am a first time writer.

I did a story that I guess would classify as maybe reluctance, even if he really wasn't. It starts out with some strap-on play and ends with some male oral. Although in my mind it could go on.

I would certainly appreciate any feedback I could get about it.

 

[robertreams]

influence: How are we to respon if you don't give us a link or any clue how to find the story, not even its name?

 

[influenceable]

I guess I should have clarified. I have written the story but not yet posted it. I am in need of an editor to make sure it is board worthy. I would appreciate any help I could get.

 

[Todger65]

A category and word count are essential information when requesting an editor as we all have our preferences regarding what we will or will not edit.

The more information you can give in your post saves a lot of time in the long run.