chitchatfun05
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Most lit stories are pretty good but so many stop short of describing the details. I mean, the sounds, smells, etc.
Need more raunchy details please
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mcopado
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chitchatfun05 said:
Interesting poit...Please check out my first story...My feed back has been that they loved the details....
I'm working on another one, and I notice that my details of smells and "flavors" tends to be strong, but I'm wondering if it is silly....I'll have to wait til it gets posted...
I think i agree with both of you
to make a huge generalisation, men tend to need more details about how the charicters feel about things, and women need more physical details, in their stories.
I have read fantastic stories from both men and women this was just something i noticed in general.
to make a huge generalisation, men tend to need more details about how the charicters feel about things, and women need more physical details, in their stories.
I have read fantastic stories from both men and women this was just something i noticed in general.
australwind
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Funnily enough, I have just given a story to a friend to read prior to posting.
I made the comment that I thought I may have been a little too detailed in parts. His response? "I can always pick the stories written by a woman, they have all this detail......women always notice the details far better than men!"
I asked him to explain......he drew may attention to the section I had written about the bed.
"It was a big bed and it had been sitting there, a silent invitation all the way through their evening together. Her jacket was tossed carelessly over its foot, spread pulled back to reveal a couple of pillows it appeared she had rested against sometime before his arrival."
As a man? I would have just made sure ...yes, there was a bed!
As for the rest of the story......suffice to say it pressed his buttons!
I made the comment that I thought I may have been a little too detailed in parts. His response? "I can always pick the stories written by a woman, they have all this detail......women always notice the details far better than men!"
I asked him to explain......he drew may attention to the section I had written about the bed.
"It was a big bed and it had been sitting there, a silent invitation all the way through their evening together. Her jacket was tossed carelessly over its foot, spread pulled back to reveal a couple of pillows it appeared she had rested against sometime before his arrival."
As a man? I would have just made sure ...yes, there was a bed!
As for the rest of the story......suffice to say it pressed his buttons!
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