I have a great Idea for a story...but I've never written one before and need help....I would like it to be a hardcore...date Rape kinda thing...Don't really know what to call it...But the guy goes on the date with his girl...and gets mad becasue she doesn't invite him in afterwards and rapes her...Beats her some....etc....I need some help big time...Thanks
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Akito01
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I don't think a story with physical violence like that is likely to be accepted for publication here. The date rape scenario itself may be alright, assuming there comes a point where the female character comes around to the sexual proceedings in some way, but I can't imagine a sex story based around violence is going to be posted up.
Not like violence violence....just slapping her a couple times....her rejceting it and than him handcuffing her and using nipple clamps and butt plugs and stuff...The thing about it not being posted....There was one with a guy getting his deick bit off...How could a few slaps be worse than that?
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I do not think that kind of violence is going to be a problem with posting. {"Snuff" is not a category to write about.} But you can fuck her then kill her if you like. As long as she is 18 and is not a dog/animal. Ive read a few of those stories here just something not quite erotic to me.
It will be a great story....I just need some ideas....like how it should start...how it should end...etc. I changed my mind....It is kind of rape at first....but after he spanks her with a paddle and screws her up the butt a couple minutes she likes it and they start dating and stuff...
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Shadow19 said:
You know, there is a great erotic novel you might be interested in called 'A Man With A Maid'. It's a Victorian novel, but despite the antique setting, has a lot of exactly what you describe here. The main character, having been rebuffed by a young woman, takes her into his basement where he ties her up, strips her bare, then spanks her and forces her into anal sex. It isn't quite a cruel as that brief description lets on, since most of the torture he inflicts on her is of the sensual variety; teasing her with feathers and his tongue until she is on the verge of orgasm. By the end of it, he finally takes her virginity, but she also awakes sexually as well and they end up as a couple with the intention of marriage.
I guess, using that as a model for your own story, it would probably be best to start with the intimation that the two characters already have some history together. Perhaps she is a terrible tease, or enjoys stringing guys along for money; it's a bit of a stereotype, but if you establish the female character as being somewhat unlikeable, then the violence and rape have an element of 'comeuppance' about it which makes it more acceptable (in the context of the story)
Well...there was something else on my mind too....I kinda like the male teacher steals students virginity....I don't know....I'm an idiot and my story will never be seen....because I'm to dumb to write it and it won't come out right! Thanks for the help.
Well I was kind of thinking something of guy meets girl in a bar and drugs the drink. Takes her to his house....to the basement....ties her to a table and gets her anally then spanks her b/c she won't suck him....spanks her hard...than she says okay and it's on from there....but it has to be more detailed...and I'm not good at details.
