Need Help!

[inspirixis]

I need someone who reads a lot of published contemporary romance novels to help me with either of two manuscripts. The first drafts are posted here on Literotica and have received pretty good ratings, but I can't seem to get an agent to sign either of them. I've had requests for partials, but each time the agent has gotten back to me saying something generic and vague like, 'Your writing is fine, it's just not compelling enough for me.'

So what I need is someone who knows the genre well and can point out the areas where I'm going wrong or what I'm lacking. I need someone who goes out and buys romance off the shelves to tell me if they wouldn't buy it and why.

Illawarra Flame is ~87,000 words

The Grace I've Known is ~93,000 words

Thanks!

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

 

[inspirixis]

Thanks! Have done.

 

[honeywldcat]

I'd love to help out. A couple of my favorite authors are in that category, Lori Foster and Janelle Denison. If you'd like you can e-mail me and we can go from there.

~~honeywldcat~~

 

[_Lynn_]

You'll want to remove your e-mail address as posting it is against forum guidelines.