Need help writing...

[riskyfella]

this is my first attempt to write an erotic story and would like someone to read over it and offer any editing tips that they might have. i have not posted my story since i would first like for it to get proof read.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

You might get a better response if you specify the genre of your story (eg romance, non-consent, incest, gay male, lesbian, etc), the help you feel you need (e.g. grammar only, grammar and continuity, etc.), and its length (in words) as these factors play a large part in a volunteer editor's decision whether to offer help.

 

[MicKay]

Do you ever get tired.....

You might get a better response if you specify the genre of your story (eg romance, non-consent, incest, gay male, lesbian, etc), the help you feel you need (e.g. grammar only, grammar and continuity, etc.), and its length (in words) as these factors play a large part in a volunteer editor's decision whether to offer help.

...of reminding us newbies
1) you might get a better response if you state genre, etc
2) you might get a response if you accept PMs

Thanks for being patient with us.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

...of reminding us newbies
1) you might get a better response if you state genre, etc
2) you might get a response if you accept PMs

Thanks for being patient with us.

We are here to help, not chatise. At the end of the day we are all the same.

 

[_Lynn_]

We are here to help, not chatise. At the end of the day we are all the same.

We are all the same?

So you're a girl like me, AS?

 

[AsylumSeeker]

We are all the same?

So you're a girl like me, AS?

Yes, I am. Well, with an "innie" turned to an "outtie"

 

[bronzeage]

...of reminding us newbies
1) you might get a better response if you state genre, etc
2) you might get a response if you accept PMs

Thanks for being patient with us.

It's a fair list.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

Do you ever get tired.....

...of reminding us newbies
1) you might get a better response if you state genre, etc
2) you might get a response if you accept PMs

Thanks for being patient with us.

People helped me when I was a newbie, ten years ago.

 

[Epmd607]

Just post your story here. You'll get some sort of return, hints at what's wrong at the very least.

 

[Fran26]

I am new here, i whant to post my true storie af a week-end of cheating on my fiance , and the desastous results for me .
I plan to change all names , mask as best i can the locals and not give any details that would permit identification .
Will this be permissible ?????
fran26

 

[AsylumSeeker]

I am new here, i whant to post my true storie af a week-end of cheating on my fiance , and the desastous results for me .
I plan to change all names , mask as best i can the locals and not give any details that would permit identification .
Will this be permissible ?????
fran26

A wise man once told me that it is easier to ask for forgiveness that to ask for permission. To be truthful others have posted stories in threads. As long as you go by the cardinal rule of establishing the age of all parties as being 18 or older, should be no problem.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

I am new here, ...

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

... i whant to post my true storie af a week-end of cheating on my fiance , and the desastous results for me ...

Post your story using the Submissions mechanism at http://www.literotica.com/members/submissions.php after logging in.

... I plan to change all names , mask as best i can the locals and not give any details that would permit identification .
Will this be permissible ?????

Even "true" (whatever that means) stories are allowed on here, provided everyone concerned is 18 and nobody is snuffed.