Need help. Writers block.

[AnIndecisiveSub]

Hey y'all. So it's been a Looooong while since I've written a story. I had a quick burst of inspiration today and started a tale of a submissive girl who runs into a man at the mall. He's been watching her for sometime now. And she's about to find out why. (But then I took a break, came back to the story, and lost it all. Please help, send in ideas, and i'll complete the story. Whos ever I choose, I will recognize them in the story. ((there may be multiple picks## Also I'll give proper credit where it's deserved.#

I plan on making a decision by midnight sunday #5/11/12#

So here's what I have so far, and i hope it can be salvaged. lol. Enjoy.
#ignore grammer/spl error. This is definately a ROUGH draft)


I was headed toward the main bathrooms in the mall, when i first noticed him. He was accross the crowded food court, but he stood out from everyone. He saw me notice him, like he'd seen me long before i saw him. I thought I would trip as my eyes froze on him. It was long passed awkward when I realized I was starring at him.
That he was starring at me. His eyes felt so familiar.
I quickly turned my eyes and made my way to the bathroom doors. As I walked i still felt his eyes on me. Not just my head, neck and back, but seeing the back of my soul. Then I had another revolation. I remembered that familiar feeling, the feeling of his eyes on me. I remembered seeing him multiple, MULTIPLE times before.
My heart jumped.
My body was then shoved through the door of the bathroom. My face held against the tiled wall by an #un)known hand. My stomache pressed between Him and the baby changing station. With His free hand He reached over and locked the door. The "click" rang loud in my ears.


#To be continued)


any constructive critisim is encouraged. all i ask is that you dont' be mean just to be mean. lol.

 

[PoppingTom]

Cure for Writer's Block by damppanties


...best advice so far...

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Cure for Writer's Block by damppanties


...best advice so far...

Naaah. Every writers block event is nuthin more than having nuthin to say. The cupboard in bare.

If youre sitting at your desk daydreaming, and the office building across the street collapses, you'd have plenty to write about. Or maybe youre on the floor, under your desk, searching for your contact lens, when the boss decides to use your empty office to give one of your colleagues a quickie atop your desk.

 

[PoppingTom]

Every writers block event is nuthin more than having nuthin to say.

Do I have something to say when I write?

Sometimes I wonder...

 

[AnIndecisiveSub]

lol. I always feel like what I say out loud is never worthy of being put to paper. but as i said before if you all have quick ideas on how this story should go.. (how you'd like to see it go) i'm all ears. i'm kind of excited to do a "colaborated" story.