Need help with story Re: Private wife's mid-life awakening

[mtwain4u]

The story is about a private, conservative wife who happens upon some things that start to reshape how she thinks about sex. She is horny, but very private. So private that, on her own, she wouldn't ordinarily look at porn, chat, or tease let alone actually start acting out fantasy or trying new things. The story is about her slow, step-by-step mid-life sexual awakening.

The first chapter is about her trip to the health club after a long, typical suburban day. After a workout she's relaxing in the hottub and from her protected vantage point she spies one of the employees playing with himself. Nothing happens between them; the point of the chapter is to start developing within her a voyeuristic streak.

I need help with ideas for subsequent chapters. What type of real life circumstances (has to be believable) can she by accident, or by design, walk herself into? And, how does she slowly evolve into a woman who - one way or another - acts on her urges?

Thanks in advance for any suggestions. Just to be clear, not looking for cable guy comes over and she sucks him off sort of stuff...I want it to be based on what could very easily happen in the real world.

 

[katt2007]

Exhibitionism is usually easier to make seem real than voyerism. The trouble with voyerism is you need to be lucky! You need to accidentally hit apon someone doing something naughty, and while that may happen every now and again, basing a story around it may make it seem artificial.

How about finding some naked pictures of a friend on his computer? Or she spills boiling water over a guy's pants and he has to quickly remove them (and she has to hold a cold compress to him). Or she discovers a peep-hole between the male and female restrooms.

As I said, exhibitionism is easier. For example, the old classic where she goes out in her robe to pick up the paper off the porch, but the door slams shut and locks with the hem of the robe stuck in it. She has to run naked around the back of the house. Or maybe she is naked in her bedroom when she realises her pervy neighbour is viewing her with binoculars. She covers up quickly but later she decides to give him a show. Or very simple things, like deciding to wear a short skirt, but when her boss gives her a ride in his new sports car with the bucket seats...

 

[Itroll]

Exhibitionism is usually easier to make seem real than voyerism. The trouble with voyerism is you need to be lucky! You need to accidentally hit apon someone doing something naughty, and while that may happen every now and again, basing a story around it may make it seem artificial.

How about finding some naked pictures of a friend on his computer? Or she spills boiling water over a guy's pants and he has to quickly remove them (and she has to hold a cold compress to him). Or she discovers a peep-hole between the male and female restrooms.

As I said, exhibitionism is easier. For example, the old classic where she goes out in her robe to pick up the paper off the porch, but the door slams shut and locks with the hem of the robe stuck in it. She has to run naked around the back of the house. Or maybe she is naked in her bedroom when she realises her pervy neighbour is viewing her with binoculars. She covers up quickly but later she decides to give him a show. Or very simple things, like deciding to wear a short skirt, but when her boss gives her a ride in his new sports car with the bucket seats...

show panties-------zzzzzz

 

[roomfor1more]

I am not sure if you are doing a snapshot story, where the woman witnesses different sex scenes from a far, a voyeur or if you are looking to develop the relationship between the woman and the employee. If the latter is the case your chapter might have her begin an innocent conversation with him and then develop things from there. Maybe a few chapters later you may want to include that she saw him playing with himself and she saw his cock that she wanted in her. However if the former is what you are wanting then think about different places she could witness them and how it would make her feel. It could be that some of the scenes she witnesses fuels her own sexual adventures as she evolves as a character. In either situation, my feeling you need to define if the woman is a voyeur that uses what she sees in her evolution of becoming a sexually awakened woman or her developing relationship with the guy.

 

[MilkFountain]

The story is about a private, conservative wife who . . . (is) So private that, on her own, she wouldn't ordinarily look at porn, chat, or tease let alone actually start acting out fantasy or trying new things. The story is about her slow, step-by-step mid-life sexual awakening.

Dear would-be Writer . . . May I suggest that your story is not about "sexual" awakening per se, but about a recluse who begins to come out of her hermit-like existance by a chance encounter that by sexual means drags or yanks her out of a solitary existance?

(incidentally, in "mid-life" women do not "awaken" sexually—they are, for reproductive imperative and hormonal flood, fairly rampant in their needs. The biological facts, both psychological ("ticking biological clock") and physical (aggressively sexually receptive when ovulating), are not usually altered by psychological crippling.)

 

[geordiejen]

well how can you say a day to day thing thats believable when it all starts off with someone having a wank and a stranger catching them or seeing them ive never seen this male or female.ive got a good story thats actually true but im not very good at writing stories.

 

[EveAnna]

What about having her live in an apartment block, make it one of the modern ones with lots of glass - one side she has a view - mountains or sea view - so she has a telescope. One night, bored, she turns off her apartment lights and flips the telescope over to start looking at the apartments surrounding hers.

You could have some real fun running with a storyline like this, especially when she realises that she could be being watched too.

 

[SierraSlim]

This will be something my beautiful milf g/f might want to read and expound on. I will have to show her this thread.

 

[sandiasky6]

some good feedback also needed

glad you posted this, here is my two cents:

I got about three stories going with similar "conservative women awakening" being very erotic to me.

I am struggling with same thing of how to get starting point believable and smooth.

Adding to my struggle is a few situations I have heard about (I have worked for two decades in mostly to all female staffed positions, I am non-threatening, the "safe" guy type and so have heard many, many erotic conversations, getting to hear the unedited version of "woman" talk) don't have a transition. Things just happen and apparently catch the normally conservative women at right point or whatever... cannot find words for my stories for this.

So, the seeing someone wanking and then and then and then and then starts engaging in erotic sex does not seem to be what really happens.

A very exotic looking accountant did an internship her senior year. Long time boyfriend. She is out of town. Oh, this is real deal by the way. Her long time boyfriend of two years only third guy ever with. This girl is very hot in appearance. Lack of numbers her deal. You know, the whole friendship first, relationship starts then sex happens along the way and she is all in for relationship as it develops.

Her last weekend of internship there is a happy hour scheduled to wish her good luck and all that. Just an informal deal to have some drinks and well wishing as is standard. Not sure if happened in beginning of gathering or middle. Just that it did. She got an invite from one of guys she had not worked on a project with but had seen often during her three months. Nothing other than brief greetings type chats up to this night. Pretty ordinary looking and quiet guy is all she would have said up to this early evening gathering. He flat out tells her that she should not finish the internship without a wild story or two. Told her that she could experience what would be the biggest dick she ever had or ever will. Then he walked away. It was so out in left field and by surprise she just chuckled. He left after saying it anyway so no need to think on feet or retort.

Anyway, without thought, the informal party winds down and again she says she didn't plan it just as if a reflex, not from eagerness to experience size even, didn't think, per her, about what he said after that... she strolled out, stopped where he was at the bar on his own and wrote her cell number down on napkin without saying a word and left He called while she was in transit and she guided him on how to get to her apt. He got there within minutes of her arrival. She said it all just happened. Not too many words exchanged. Drew some wine for each. Decided to take shower together (been a long day) and the had sex. My struggle is how to have the sex set up the right way so that it is more erotic, again to me, the "innocent" and "nice" type engaging in sex much more erotic to me than the slut knocking out four studs a week