TabooTeller
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This is a bit long but I hope good. 
Here’s another story idea I am stuck at a certain point. I know I need to do what I feel comfortable with but at this stage most of my ideas concerning this story feel comfortable. Maybe just talking about it or some idea another writer has could make something click.
So here’s hopefully a short synopses. It opens with a man talking to a woman in an office. She is some type of realtor for a new housing development. An aside here, I used that occupation because it is the only one that fits the setting I thought of. Small office building with three of four smaller offices, not in a place with a lot of such buildings. They have been doing business for maybe once a week for six months, and its not a permanent relationship. Their business will be done one day and that will probably be it for their relationship. Which isn’t that big a deal since it is only a business relationship. She is very pretty and has a nice figure with a larger bust, not huge but still nice sized.
He arrives at her office and even though he and she are the only ones in the building that isn’t that big of deal, its happened before. She’s dressed almost in her usual modest nice looking outfit. This one has a shorter skirt then usual but its not that much shorter and the top accents her breasts more then usual. He thinks and may even say nice outfit but its not the sexist one she has ever worn. One day five weeks ago she wore one with a mini skirt and a blouse that showed cleaverge. Because of the way the desk is set up even though he can’t see underneath it as he walks in, but at one point he dropped something and had to bend over to pick it up. He happened to glance under the desk and was surprised that he was able to see the color of her panties. He’s dropped things before and has never been able to see her parities before. He does take a second look but only a second look. He makes sure he doesn’t drop anything again that day. She doesn’t comment on him taking so long to find what he dropped. And he got one look down her top at one point. He noticed she was wearing a half bra.
This day everything goes smoothly but at the end she says something about business next time then asks him if she can give him a blow job. Right out of the blue. He at first begins to answer her matter of factly just like any business question then he mentally does a double take and asks her to repeat her question for he most have misunderstood it. He almost stutters as he does. She says basically that he didn’t misunderstand. She even starts to come around the desk. He backs off saying something about being faithful to his wife.
Adding another component is that he wants a blow job for his wife even after 15 to 20 years,(I haven’t decided yet) of marriage, will not let him cum in her mouth. She will suck on him up to that point and while always good recently she has become very good at that but never in her mouth. He wants to badly.
She is telling him it will be good, his wife doesn’t need to know ect., all in a sultry voice. He backs up more but she gets in his space and face to face describes what she is going to do. He decides its time to leave but as he turns toward the door he stumbles, gropes for his briefcase or some such so she beats him to the door. Again in his space she backs him up to a wall at which point she drops to her knees and underdoes his pants. At this point the only way to stop her is to use violence. She has his pants undone and down in two seconds. She slowly lowers his underwear reveling his hard cock. She smiles at it and says how good it looks, how sexy it is etc.. Suddenly she puts her mouth over it. So sudden he just gasps in surprise. Up till that point he is begging her not to but she is ignoring him.
She does the blow job, it takes him only seconds to realize as good as his wife has been getting this woman is better, she does everything including sticking a finger in his anus. She finger fucks his anus almost up to the second knuckle, gently squeezes his balls etc. She even gets him up to the point of cuming then back him away four or five times. Finally she get him to that point squeezes his balls almost to the point of pain and rams her finger in all the way. He screams, not from pain, loud enough that not only is it good they are alone in the building but also that no one is just outside. He manages to look down to and sees her swallowing the last of his cum. She smiles while sucking for a few more seconds, finally she lets go of him and says thank you I needed that. That surprises him, but he’s mind is beginning to work again and he says that he isn’t sure if he should thank her. It was good, fantastic but did he just cheat on his wife. Half cheat? He asks that because he didn’t do anything to her, didn’t even see a breast or kiss her. She says gently that is up to him to decide and walks out the door. She says to lock up when he can leave. It takes five minutes before he can pull up his pants. He is standing even though right after the climax he, while standing still, stumbled as he sagged and almost fell.
On the way home, he in between thinking about how good it was, debates rather he should tell his wife, he decides to. Wives have a way of finding things out even when there is no way they can. But at home she is busy and it isn’t till the next day that he can tell her. But not in the morning she has to rush off to an important meeting. So he gets home that afternoon, he is supposed to be home at that time on that day of the week. He walks into the empty house, the kids are still at school or at a friend’s. As he walks through the living room he is rehearsing what he is going to say. “I got something important to say. I need to say it now even though you won’t like it.” He is about to say it may effect our marriage when suddenly from behind him he hears his wife ask “what won’t I like?”
He spins around and she is just coming through the door from the kitchen. He is shocked and almost feels like he was caught doing something wrong. It takes him a second to begin gain but before he gets the first sentence out the woman who gave him the blow job also walks into the living room. His eyes go up and in a shocked voice asks her what she is doing here.
Turns out that she and his wife have been friends for a couple of years. Not close friends but more then acquaintances. He wonders why neither said anything they basically just say it never came up, there was no reason to. Things just got compilcated. Does he tell his wife with her there, if he tells his wife will it ruin their friendships? He does try to tell his wife when the friend isn’t in their presence but she always is. Once when she went to the bathroom he was going to say something but by the time he found his wife she was back from the bathroom.
That is where I got the story so far. For a month of more it been stuck there. Question I ask myself. Does the wife know already? Maybe the friend told her or the wife actually set it up. Knowing how badly he wants a complete blow job and that's he just can’t let him finish in her mouth she asked the friend to do it knowing how she loves giving blow jobs and that she is good at it.
Or has the friend done the same thing to the wife also? I don’t think they are having an affair because he was supposed to be home but they won’t, so its not like he came home early and surprised them.And their clothes do not look wrinkled like they taken off and hurriedly put back on.
Recently I thought of more scenarios. Actually her giving him the blow job had nothing to do with being friends with the wife, he just happened to be the male around when she felt the need to give one a blow job. Remember she said thank you.
Or her and the wife could be having an affair because he has no idea how long they were home, before he got there, in fact he doesn’t know why they were in the house at all. His wife was supposed to be working. The wife never explained and he had other things on his mind so didn’t ask.
Or she is having an affair and wants him to, what's good for her is good for him, she does love him after all, and/or if he is having an affair he can’t get mad at her for her’s. In fact was that really a work meeting she went to in the morning? Maybe not.
Or along the same lines she has recently become freer sexually and wants him to join her in that new way.
Or actually the friend is her sister, except he should know all her sisters. Maybe an old friend from high school. The friend was the blow job champaign of the high school and taught the wife how to give good blow jobs, which she did in high school even though not near as many as the friend. So what will he say when he learns that his wife gave blow jobs in high school but won’t allow him to cum in her mouth. Of course this scenario kinda does away with the idea that her sucking was getting better. It should have already been great. But I came up with an idea of why she gave them in high school but won’t do it for him. Turns out she hates the taste of cum. Her friend loves it which is why she was the champion, but the wife almost threw up half the time a guy cam in her mouth. She even became quite good at secretly spitting it out so she won’t have to swallow it. She only did it because that was what some of the guys expected and if she didn’t she was afraid they might take something else and/or she did it because the friend expected it. They even went on double dates ending up with double blow jobs. That is one was in the back seat and one in the front seat, both giving a blow job at the same time. Now that she is married she doesn’t have to give them. However she finally does allow him to cum in her mouth, she does love him and knows he wants to so bad, and she might be able to cope with it better now. Nope, as soon as she is done and swallows the last of it, she runs off to the bathroom and throws up. He follows and when he finds out why she threw up he is apologetic. He knows he nagged her a little, and he tried to keep that down to a minimum, but he never thought she would have that reaction. Not liking the taste is one thing but throwing because of it is another.
So those is my ideas, some more developed then others. Actually I feel less comfortable with the sexual free life style idea so I probably won’t use that unless I get another idea to go along with it so that I feel it fits the story after all. That has happened with other stories.
TabooTeller
Here’s another story idea I am stuck at a certain point. I know I need to do what I feel comfortable with but at this stage most of my ideas concerning this story feel comfortable. Maybe just talking about it or some idea another writer has could make something click.
So here’s hopefully a short synopses. It opens with a man talking to a woman in an office. She is some type of realtor for a new housing development. An aside here, I used that occupation because it is the only one that fits the setting I thought of. Small office building with three of four smaller offices, not in a place with a lot of such buildings. They have been doing business for maybe once a week for six months, and its not a permanent relationship. Their business will be done one day and that will probably be it for their relationship. Which isn’t that big a deal since it is only a business relationship. She is very pretty and has a nice figure with a larger bust, not huge but still nice sized.
He arrives at her office and even though he and she are the only ones in the building that isn’t that big of deal, its happened before. She’s dressed almost in her usual modest nice looking outfit. This one has a shorter skirt then usual but its not that much shorter and the top accents her breasts more then usual. He thinks and may even say nice outfit but its not the sexist one she has ever worn. One day five weeks ago she wore one with a mini skirt and a blouse that showed cleaverge. Because of the way the desk is set up even though he can’t see underneath it as he walks in, but at one point he dropped something and had to bend over to pick it up. He happened to glance under the desk and was surprised that he was able to see the color of her panties. He’s dropped things before and has never been able to see her parities before. He does take a second look but only a second look. He makes sure he doesn’t drop anything again that day. She doesn’t comment on him taking so long to find what he dropped. And he got one look down her top at one point. He noticed she was wearing a half bra.
This day everything goes smoothly but at the end she says something about business next time then asks him if she can give him a blow job. Right out of the blue. He at first begins to answer her matter of factly just like any business question then he mentally does a double take and asks her to repeat her question for he most have misunderstood it. He almost stutters as he does. She says basically that he didn’t misunderstand. She even starts to come around the desk. He backs off saying something about being faithful to his wife.
Adding another component is that he wants a blow job for his wife even after 15 to 20 years,(I haven’t decided yet) of marriage, will not let him cum in her mouth. She will suck on him up to that point and while always good recently she has become very good at that but never in her mouth. He wants to badly.
She is telling him it will be good, his wife doesn’t need to know ect., all in a sultry voice. He backs up more but she gets in his space and face to face describes what she is going to do. He decides its time to leave but as he turns toward the door he stumbles, gropes for his briefcase or some such so she beats him to the door. Again in his space she backs him up to a wall at which point she drops to her knees and underdoes his pants. At this point the only way to stop her is to use violence. She has his pants undone and down in two seconds. She slowly lowers his underwear reveling his hard cock. She smiles at it and says how good it looks, how sexy it is etc.. Suddenly she puts her mouth over it. So sudden he just gasps in surprise. Up till that point he is begging her not to but she is ignoring him.
She does the blow job, it takes him only seconds to realize as good as his wife has been getting this woman is better, she does everything including sticking a finger in his anus. She finger fucks his anus almost up to the second knuckle, gently squeezes his balls etc. She even gets him up to the point of cuming then back him away four or five times. Finally she get him to that point squeezes his balls almost to the point of pain and rams her finger in all the way. He screams, not from pain, loud enough that not only is it good they are alone in the building but also that no one is just outside. He manages to look down to and sees her swallowing the last of his cum. She smiles while sucking for a few more seconds, finally she lets go of him and says thank you I needed that. That surprises him, but he’s mind is beginning to work again and he says that he isn’t sure if he should thank her. It was good, fantastic but did he just cheat on his wife. Half cheat? He asks that because he didn’t do anything to her, didn’t even see a breast or kiss her. She says gently that is up to him to decide and walks out the door. She says to lock up when he can leave. It takes five minutes before he can pull up his pants. He is standing even though right after the climax he, while standing still, stumbled as he sagged and almost fell.
On the way home, he in between thinking about how good it was, debates rather he should tell his wife, he decides to. Wives have a way of finding things out even when there is no way they can. But at home she is busy and it isn’t till the next day that he can tell her. But not in the morning she has to rush off to an important meeting. So he gets home that afternoon, he is supposed to be home at that time on that day of the week. He walks into the empty house, the kids are still at school or at a friend’s. As he walks through the living room he is rehearsing what he is going to say. “I got something important to say. I need to say it now even though you won’t like it.” He is about to say it may effect our marriage when suddenly from behind him he hears his wife ask “what won’t I like?”
He spins around and she is just coming through the door from the kitchen. He is shocked and almost feels like he was caught doing something wrong. It takes him a second to begin gain but before he gets the first sentence out the woman who gave him the blow job also walks into the living room. His eyes go up and in a shocked voice asks her what she is doing here.
Turns out that she and his wife have been friends for a couple of years. Not close friends but more then acquaintances. He wonders why neither said anything they basically just say it never came up, there was no reason to. Things just got compilcated. Does he tell his wife with her there, if he tells his wife will it ruin their friendships? He does try to tell his wife when the friend isn’t in their presence but she always is. Once when she went to the bathroom he was going to say something but by the time he found his wife she was back from the bathroom.
That is where I got the story so far. For a month of more it been stuck there. Question I ask myself. Does the wife know already? Maybe the friend told her or the wife actually set it up. Knowing how badly he wants a complete blow job and that's he just can’t let him finish in her mouth she asked the friend to do it knowing how she loves giving blow jobs and that she is good at it.
Or has the friend done the same thing to the wife also? I don’t think they are having an affair because he was supposed to be home but they won’t, so its not like he came home early and surprised them.And their clothes do not look wrinkled like they taken off and hurriedly put back on.
Recently I thought of more scenarios. Actually her giving him the blow job had nothing to do with being friends with the wife, he just happened to be the male around when she felt the need to give one a blow job. Remember she said thank you.
Or her and the wife could be having an affair because he has no idea how long they were home, before he got there, in fact he doesn’t know why they were in the house at all. His wife was supposed to be working. The wife never explained and he had other things on his mind so didn’t ask.
Or she is having an affair and wants him to, what's good for her is good for him, she does love him after all, and/or if he is having an affair he can’t get mad at her for her’s. In fact was that really a work meeting she went to in the morning? Maybe not.
Or along the same lines she has recently become freer sexually and wants him to join her in that new way.
Or actually the friend is her sister, except he should know all her sisters. Maybe an old friend from high school. The friend was the blow job champaign of the high school and taught the wife how to give good blow jobs, which she did in high school even though not near as many as the friend. So what will he say when he learns that his wife gave blow jobs in high school but won’t allow him to cum in her mouth. Of course this scenario kinda does away with the idea that her sucking was getting better. It should have already been great. But I came up with an idea of why she gave them in high school but won’t do it for him. Turns out she hates the taste of cum. Her friend loves it which is why she was the champion, but the wife almost threw up half the time a guy cam in her mouth. She even became quite good at secretly spitting it out so she won’t have to swallow it. She only did it because that was what some of the guys expected and if she didn’t she was afraid they might take something else and/or she did it because the friend expected it. They even went on double dates ending up with double blow jobs. That is one was in the back seat and one in the front seat, both giving a blow job at the same time. Now that she is married she doesn’t have to give them. However she finally does allow him to cum in her mouth, she does love him and knows he wants to so bad, and she might be able to cope with it better now. Nope, as soon as she is done and swallows the last of it, she runs off to the bathroom and throws up. He follows and when he finds out why she threw up he is apologetic. He knows he nagged her a little, and he tried to keep that down to a minimum, but he never thought she would have that reaction. Not liking the taste is one thing but throwing because of it is another.
So those is my ideas, some more developed then others. Actually I feel less comfortable with the sexual free life style idea so I probably won’t use that unless I get another idea to go along with it so that I feel it fits the story after all. That has happened with other stories.
TabooTeller