LucyH
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I started a multi-part story a while ago, involving BDSM, a bisexual vampire, and soap opera style drama.
Unfortunately, after 15 short-ish episodes, it ran off the rails. Secondary characters that I planned to bring in seemed flat when they arrived and I ran into a couple plot holes. Between that and real life interfering, I stopped writing it. Now I barely even remember what the plot was going to be. I have another episode that I haven't posted because it makes me go "meh." But I like the way the series starts, and I want to get it moving again.
The link to the first episode is here:
http://www.literotica.com/s/technical-difficulties-episode-01
I'd like some help finishing it in a way that doesn't suck - part brainstorming and advice, part editing. So if anybody feels up to being my Yoda, please drop me a note. I know that having another point of view can make a world of difference.
-Lucy
Unfortunately, after 15 short-ish episodes, it ran off the rails. Secondary characters that I planned to bring in seemed flat when they arrived and I ran into a couple plot holes. Between that and real life interfering, I stopped writing it. Now I barely even remember what the plot was going to be. I have another episode that I haven't posted because it makes me go "meh." But I like the way the series starts, and I want to get it moving again.
The link to the first episode is here:
http://www.literotica.com/s/technical-difficulties-episode-01
I'd like some help finishing it in a way that doesn't suck - part brainstorming and advice, part editing. So if anybody feels up to being my Yoda, please drop me a note. I know that having another point of view can make a world of difference.
-Lucy
