Need help! how to write

[SassyKat69]

I'm new to this site... I have found some very good stories... but the main reason I came here is to find ideas how to write a story.

My boyfriend writes me stories when he's at work and they're very exciting. Well he wants me to write him erotic stories as well while he's at work and email them to him. But I have no idea where to start and how to end it.

How would I start one and end one? I need ideas... He most fav one is like me showing me at his office with nothing but lace panties and bra on underneath a long coat. Can someone come up with a starting and I finish it? LOL I know this sound so silly but I've never really wrote a story before and I know it'd sound stupid if I try to. He has made me feel bad about it when I tell him I can't write a story and I've tried but ended up sound sooo corny.

Thanks everyone that replies!

 

[BirdsWife]

Did he say your stories were corny or do you think they sound that way?

I can only speak for myself, but it would be flattering enough that my SO took the time to write something for me that I wouldn't really care if it weren't the next great American novel.

I think the most important consideration is to incorporate the things he has specifically asked you to include. For example, start with the panties and bra underneath a coat. Does he want you to be noticed? Then have it set on a day where a woman in a coat would stand out. Does he prefer you to be covert? Make sure it's raining or cold out.

Does he like the idea of you two going at it in his office while others are around, or would he like it to be a discreet after work scenario?

Whatever his preferences, be very descriptive about what you are doing and use the words he likes to hear:

I take your cock out of your pants.

becomes:

My eyes lock with yours as I rub your erection, savoring the feel of your restrained hardness one last time before unfastening the button on your pants and lowering the zipper. The sound of metal teeth parting against the force of your hard cock echoes so loudly in your office that I'm certain your coworkers know precisely why I'm here. As I reach inside your boxers to wrap my eager fingers around your heated flesh, the thought of one of them walking in on us sends a thrill up my spine. I don't ever remember being this wet before.


As far as ending it goes, why don't you leave it open-ended? Build your story up to where he is about to enter you or you are about to suck him off, but then stop it right there. Tell him he can hear the rest of the story in bed later that night.


Good luck with your writing. I hope this helps you get started. If you need someone to bounce ideas off of, you can always PM me.

BirdsWife

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Okay. Going to work with nothing on under a long coat?
Here's an opening. (I assume you want to tell it in first person)

"I would never had done anything like this on my own, but SO kept bugging me about it, begging and pleading. He really wanted me to show up at his office wearing nothing but my coat, my underwear, and my shoes, and finally, when he accused me of being chicken, I figured I'd show him. "

What you want to do then is decrige what you're wearing (which bra and which panties), then describe how it feels to do it. What it feels like to your body (probably pretty drafty) and what you're thinking while you do it (Oh my God! Can this guys see through the buttons?) Really picture inyour mind what it feels like:how strange iut would feel to feel the fabric of your coat touching your belly and the backs of your thighs with no blouse or skirt between you and the coat. How you worry that if you move the wrong way a button might open, and then what would everyone think?

If you're uncomfortable writing a story, just write a list of what you think you'd think and feel and how you'd expect people would react. That would do

As an ending, hell, I suppose you SO taking you by the arm and leaving youout would do. Really, he's probably not expecting a Pulitzer Prize winner. He probably just gets off on the idea of your writing anything sexy.

---dr.M.

 

[openthighs_sarah]

What you want to do then is decrige what you're wearing (which bra and which panties)

I always try to decrige things using dialogue instead of standard narrative decrigion.

(Just kidding, dr. M!)

SassyKat, I don't mind helping you out if you want, although I agree with the others that your SO is probably not expecting something really polished. I think, more than anything, he wants to know that you were aroused enough to fantasize and to write it down (even though he's the one who's asking for it).

So my suggestion is to think about what makes you excited and dazed and wet, and go from there. If you really get excited thinking about it and you take the time to write it down, that's almost guaranteed to excite him more than if you just write out one of his fantasies.

You can PM me if you want, and I'd be happy to help if you want some feedback before you pass it along to your SO.

 

[Antinomy]

I suggest you be careful using email. It is not actually as private as it appears. It may or may not be the case, but it is certainly possible that his or your company is archiving every email he or you receive or send.

 

[snooper]

I suggest you be careful using email. It is not actually as private as it appears. It may or may not be the case, but it is certainly possible that his or your company is archiving every email he or you receive or send.

Even if neither of them is the ISPs concerned will be, as a legal duty.

 

[SexyChele]

Rather than trying to write his fantasy for a first attempt - why not write one of your own? For me, when I first started doing this, it was easier to think of what I wanted to do/have done and write it out. I could picture it in my mind so the words flowed. I can write another person's fantasy, but it's just more difficult, IMO. Especially for some one who is fairly new to writing.

As to a beginning? Begin where you feel comfortable. Getting dressed for the event? The anticipation building? Or do you simply arrive and let the reader try to piece things together until you reveal all to him? (pun intended!) The story is yours. You decided at what point it begins, but a little build up is always nice. If you just describe sex, it can be a little of a let down. Try to set the scene a bit, even if only in a few sentences.

As to an ending? Same thing. You end it where you feel comfortable. Right after sex? Great. Just before sex begins, while asking if he wants to see part 2? Terrific! There are so many possibilities!

Just remember that most men, when receiving a little something naughty in their email from the partners, are just pleased that they were thought of to be concerned about what the actual words say. Don't be afraid to use your imagination and just let it flow. I'm sure he'll be thrilled no matter what you write about!

Good luck! These things are always fun!

 

[Chicklet]

Idea:

Since you're sharing this experience with your S.O. maybe you could make it an interactive experience.

What if you asked him to start the story off, give the characters and the setting, and then after a few paragraphs of his own imaginings you took over and filled in the blanks while he was gone? That might be fun for you two =) Then when he got home you could act them out = )

-Chicklet

 

[CrownJoolz]

Everyone else has already given you some great advice. I particularly like Chicklet's idea. You can make it a chain story, where you alternate writing blocks of it; he takes it to a certain point and stops, you pick it up and continue it then stop, he picks up where you left off, etc. It could be quite fun. I also agree, though, that email at work is a slippery slope.

Joolz