Need help finishing a 6 part series - Kathryn's Downward Spiral

[Meadowshadow]

Hey,

I have written 5 chapters for a story which centres around sex fighting, submission, and reluctance.

I was happy with the first 4 chapters, but I got a bit of negative feedback from chapter 5.

I am now ready to bring this series to an end and focus on other stories, but I dont want it to go out with a whimper. I have an idea of how I would like to proceed with chapter 6, but I would really appreciate some feedback and suggestions from anybody willing to discuss this with me?

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5020245&page=submissions

 

[yukonnights]

I'm going to suggest that you may have better luck with the kind of help you're looking for in either/both; Story Ideas, or the Editor sub-forums. Wouldn't hurt to also ask this in those also.

What you seem to be asking for is a collaborative effort, or writing buddy.

 

[LWulf]

Sincere intentions aside, it's a lot to ask for anything more than one chapter at a time. I tried helping someone and, well, it came at a bad time health wise, but also what you're asking for still is extremely taxing. What you're asking for is nothing short of herculean in scope for what is nothing more than a thank you in payment, if you remember to say thank you.

My suggestion is, if you get someone willing to do all six parts, get them to do it in pieces. Don't forget to thank them every step of the way, because coffee doesn't help enough. If you start having any self doubts, keep them to yourself, because that just drains the energy right out of the other person.

 

[ElectricBlue]

My suggestion is, if you get someone willing to do all six parts, get them to do it in pieces. Don't forget to thank them every step of the way, because coffee doesn't help enough. If you start having any self doubts, keep them to yourself, because that just drains the energy right out of the other person.

I think the OP only wants support on Part 6.

But it sounds to me that the OP has run out of ideas - the original request sounds a bit like "writing by committee," which is rarely a good idea.

My advice to the OP would be to get ideas, have their own bash at Part 6, and then go looking for an editor. This seems to be a request for a co-writer, which is something quite different to an editor.

 

[LWulf]

I think the OP only wants support on Part 6.

But it sounds to me that the OP has run out of ideas - the original request sounds a bit like "writing by committee," which is rarely a good idea.

My advice to the OP would be to get ideas, have their own bash at Part 6, and then go looking for an editor. This seems to be a request for a co-writer, which is something quite different to an editor.

I did see that after I posted, but left it as was. Even getting a co-writer to help with one chapter is asking a lot. They'd have to read the first 5 chapters, find out the why's and whatfor's to then assist in the eleventh hour for one chapter. Which is why I left my previous comment as was, it's kinda sorta still applicable.

Your advise sounds better.