Need help choosing the right category

[LucilleCF]

So here is a brief synopsis of the story I'm working on:

Girl goes to a club looking for a one night stand. Once she finds a guy she likes, she flirts with him a bit and then abruptly leaves the club, prompting him to follow her with suggestive glances. He does, but whenever he gets close, she runs away. Finally he begins chasing her around until he finally catches her and has sex with her... somewhat forcefully, owing to his frustration at having to work so hard for it.


Now, I'm slightly confused as to where to put this story because, although it does end with the male character getting a little rough and taking the female character by force, I intend to make it clear throughout the story that this is exactly what she wants: to be chased and captured.

So where do I put it? Non-Con doesn't seem right to me. Would Fetish be a better fit?

 

[ElectricBlue]

Erotic Couplings maybe - your scenario doesn't sound extreme enough for non-con, and a bit of eager reluctance is hardly a fetish.

 

[LucilleCF]

Erotic Couplings maybe - your scenario doesn't sound extreme enough for non-con, and a bit of eager reluctance is hardly a fetish.

Ah, thank you, thank you.

 

[RejectReality]

Yep, going to have to agree with EB on exactly the same grounds. It doesn't rise to the other two potential categories.

EC is the grab-bag category for those stories with only two participants that don't really fit anywhere else.

 

[Hypoxia]

As described, EC fits best. But it could be twisted elsewhere. These come to mind:

* Rough chases are her thang ==> Fetish
* Ethnic differences ==> Interracial
* Either are famous ==> Celebs
* They are related ==> Incest
* Age difference ==> Mature

Other twists can stay in EC. They're married and roleplaying, or "reality show" actors. But I like O.Henry twist endings. YMMV.

 

[LucilleCF]

As described, EC fits best. But it could be twisted elsewhere. These come to mind:

* Rough chases are her thang ==> Fetish


Other twists can stay in EC. They're married and roleplaying, or "reality show" actors. But I like O.Henry twist endings. YMMV.

See, that's the thing. My female character specifically goes out with the intent of getting chased. It's her 'thang' as you put it. She gets off on it and becomes frustrated if she doesn't get it. I intend to have her get soaking wet in anticipation of being caught.

Still wondering if that good enough for Fetish, though.

 

[Hypoxia]

See, that's the thing. My female character specifically goes out with the intent of getting chased. It's her 'thang' as you put it. She gets off on it and becomes frustrated if she doesn't get it. I intend to have her get soaking wet in anticipation of being caught.

Still wondering if that good enough for Fetish, though.

As a single event, maybe not. But as part of a pattern, sure. After tonight's fun she pensively compares the current action with past chases and future games. If she thinks more of future sessions than this one, she's obsessed.

For a "non-sexual object" fetish, she demands or tricks any captor to use a specific item on her. "Don't tie my hands!" she cries, her favorite "magic rope" already dangling from a wrist. Something like that.

 

[SimonDoom]

Sounds like Erotic Couplings to me unless you add some extra spicy element to it.

For example, if while she's running away from him she strips all her clothes off, it could be an Exhibitionist story.

If she takes her shoes off and he's got a thing for feet, it could be Fetish.

If she teases him about butt play and that's where he takes her, it could be Anal.

But if it doesn't have any of those things I'd say Erotic Couplings unless you really play up the nonconsent angle. Doesn't sound like nonconsent to me if she's teasing and flirting and wants him to pursue and take her -- especially if you tell the story from her point of view.

It could be nonconsent from his point of view, I suppose, because he can't read her mind and when he takes her forcefully there's an element of uncertainty in his mind whether she is consenting or not.

 

[LucilleCF]

Thanks for the feedback. I'll just stick it in EC when I'm done.

 

[jaF0]

See, that's the thing. My female character specifically goes out with the intent of getting chased. It's her 'thang' as you put it. She gets off on it and becomes frustrated if she doesn't get it. I intend to have her get soaking wet in anticipation of being caught.

Still wondering if that good enough for Fetish, though.

Sounds like a typical weekend at the club night, playing hard to get and all.