Need Halloween Contest Editor

[n2anal78]

I'm looking for a volunteer editor for a Halloween contest story that is pretty long (19 pages in Word/7900 words).
I'm leaning towards putting it i in the mind-control category, but there is some anal and female domination elements.
Basic synopis is three young 'witches' on Halloween want to help their depressed mid-30's divorced neighbor get on with his life with a couple of spells.

 

[bikoukumori]

I wouldn't mind giving it a read. What exactly do you want an editor to do though?

 

[n2anal78]

Thanks for the offer!

bikoukumori,
Thank-you for the offer!
Typically what I need most is a gramatical review. I have a bad habit of switching tenses and other things of that nature. Also if you can catch the spelling mistakes that word's spellchecker misses.
I am pretty open to any other input, but I rarely have anyone complain about my story's flow or characters, usually the story itself is my strongest area.
I wouldn't mind another's perspective and opinion on which category I should finally post it in. I am leaning towards mind control but it has other elements that maybe should get it posted to a different category.

 

[bikoukumori]

Well first, enable PMs under edit options in the usercp. Then PM me with your email and we'll go from there.