Need feedback on story "the storm"
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Hi,
The Storm was a good read. A well told little romance-sex piece,
The oral and digital sex parts were quite 'hot.' The story works within a formula (chance-meeting/sex) but puts some life into it with the leading woman's graphic sensuality. There's more but that's enough for the time being
abashed-dreamer at literotica
lfmn2x@hotmail.com
Hi,
The Storm was a good read. A well told little romance-sex piece,
The oral and digital sex parts were quite 'hot.' The story works within a formula (chance-meeting/sex) but puts some life into it with the leading woman's graphic sensuality. There's more but that's enough for the time being
abashed-dreamer at literotica
lfmn2x@hotmail.com
