Need Feedback for a Romance Story (see post for warning)

[TheRiseFromAshes]

Hi there:

I am experimenting a story where there is romance. It is written in present tense and
in the first person-narrative of a woman. However, she is a rape victim and she is retelling it to her boyfriend (who also happened to save her, though I haven't entirely decided how) because she had suppressed it for so long and just could not hold it any longer. It contains very graphic descriptions.

I'm trying not to be generic and stereotypical and instead, I have the boyfriend as a black man - and he is a good guy, rather than a villain of some sort.

Even before the story begins, the original rapist is already in jail.


Anyone able to read through it and give me feedback? Anyone is welcome to look at it, though I would particularly like female readers to look at it and make changes if needed.


Thanks in advance.

 

[RavishingRedHead69]

I'd be happy to review it for you. I tend to be blunt so you need a thick skin. I won't be rude or unkind but speaking from experience it can fee like someone is attacking your child when they critique your writing pieces. If you'd like me to give it a go send me a private message.