Need editor, noob writer, interracial story

[LiuXiaoBai]

I have a 1500 word start to a story that I feel is the beginning of a first chapter. It involves a 6'3 white guy and a Taiwanese married beauty. It is quasi true, I would love any input.


Anyone want to edit a interracial story and stick along with me as a editor as I progress as a writer. If we fit I would like to keep submitting to you as more chapters come out.



LiuXiaoBai

 

[snooper]

If you switched on Private Messaging you would probably get more replies.

Click on USER CP at the top left of this page.

Click on Edit Options in the left hand column of the next page.

Click on Enable Private Messaging in the fifth box down the next page.

Click the Save Changes button at the bottom of the same page.

 

[LiuXiaoBai]

Its turned on now. Thanks for the tip.



Why isn't it on by default?????

 

[snooper]

Its turned on now. Thanks for the tip.



Why isn't it on by default?????

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