Hi. I'm an experienced writer, but new to erotica. I have a spanking story that really needs a fresh pair of eyes. I've taken it as far as I can and am now blind.
I need help with:
-ferreting out inconsistencies
-repetitive language
-any plot holes
-what works/doesn't work
Story blurb follows:
In socialite Lexi Hamilton’s “good girl” world, spankings and sex don’t mix--until a charity auction puts her in the hands of dominant Mark Sadiz. One night over his knee has Lexi on hers, but, when their session is over, she can’t admit she enjoyed it. Can she ever stop being a “good girl,” or will Mark have to spank her until she comes (and comes!) to her senses?
Please pm if you are interested!
Thanks for your help!
M
I need help with:
-ferreting out inconsistencies
-repetitive language
-any plot holes
-what works/doesn't work
Story blurb follows:
In socialite Lexi Hamilton’s “good girl” world, spankings and sex don’t mix--until a charity auction puts her in the hands of dominant Mark Sadiz. One night over his knee has Lexi on hers, but, when their session is over, she can’t admit she enjoyed it. Can she ever stop being a “good girl,” or will Mark have to spank her until she comes (and comes!) to her senses?
Please pm if you are interested!
Thanks for your help!
M
