Need Assistance on two Non-Sexual Stories

[NiteRidder]

Have two inspirational non sexual stories (both true) that I would like to submit and would like some authors to read for corrections and suggestions before I submit them- any takers ??

NiteRidder

1. Millie's Smile - about interfacing with a long term catatonic lady. A Christmas Story.

2. "The Amazingly Heroic - Mr. Burns" About the Gentle Giants found in Gyms and how A boy hood hero teaches two tough guys an important lesson.

Most appreciative of any assistance.

NiteRidder

 

[Route66Girl]

Hi NiteRidder

I wouldn't mind taking a crack at them. I'm not bad at proofreading, and am willing to provide suggestions. If you'd like, feel free to IM me or email the stories. Just please let me know what kind of suggestions you're looking for (grammar? characterization? plot movement? etc...)

Cheers!

 

[TrinaT]

I would also be willing to help. I have had experience with editing scientific manuscripts and magazine articles. Send a PM if you'd like my help and I'll forward my email address.

Good luck,

Trina T.