Hey all 
I am looking for an Editor. I have worked with 2 in the past, but both appear to no longer be working, which is fine btw, I'm not complaining in anyway just giving you background on my situation.
Now what I am looking for is kind of broad while also kind of specific. I want somebody who will help me look for inconsistency in characters, and story. (For example I had stated at one point that one of the characters had done X, then later had stated that she had never done X, I noticed this and decided I wanted not having done X to be the case, so edited the first case to match the second.) I am also looking for help on just the story in general, weak points, points I gloss over, etc. I am REALLY good with criticism, to the point where I'd rather you not praise me if you aren't also going to tell me what I'm doing wrong.
I wouldn't mind help with grammar as I know that I do have some issue with it, but I'm not specifically looking for that, I know people that I can have edit for grammar if you don't want to do it at all.
About the story, it's 4 chapters which I plan to publish as Book 1 of the story. Currently Chapters 1-3 are already up on lit. The first two have had editing like I am looking for now, the third has really only had grammatical and spelling errors fixed.
I am looking to have all four chapters edited as a single story. I'm not looking for a super fast time line, but if it's going to take awhile I would really like an Editor who keeps in touch with me while editing. (IE updates every week or so with 'hey I finished another 10 pages, I should have time in the next few days to get to page 24' or whatever ... I just like to know what's going on.)
If you want to look over 1-3 here are links:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=366582
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=366583
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=373530
I'm also looking for advice on the title if you're willing to give it. I thought it was 'funny' when I named it, but it's not a satire, and the title only really fits like the very first chapter ... so I am planning to rename it.
Anywho, feel free to PM me if you would be interested in helping me.
I am looking for an Editor. I have worked with 2 in the past, but both appear to no longer be working, which is fine btw, I'm not complaining in anyway just giving you background on my situation.
Now what I am looking for is kind of broad while also kind of specific. I want somebody who will help me look for inconsistency in characters, and story. (For example I had stated at one point that one of the characters had done X, then later had stated that she had never done X, I noticed this and decided I wanted not having done X to be the case, so edited the first case to match the second.) I am also looking for help on just the story in general, weak points, points I gloss over, etc. I am REALLY good with criticism, to the point where I'd rather you not praise me if you aren't also going to tell me what I'm doing wrong.
I wouldn't mind help with grammar as I know that I do have some issue with it, but I'm not specifically looking for that, I know people that I can have edit for grammar if you don't want to do it at all.
About the story, it's 4 chapters which I plan to publish as Book 1 of the story. Currently Chapters 1-3 are already up on lit. The first two have had editing like I am looking for now, the third has really only had grammatical and spelling errors fixed.
I am looking to have all four chapters edited as a single story. I'm not looking for a super fast time line, but if it's going to take awhile I would really like an Editor who keeps in touch with me while editing. (IE updates every week or so with 'hey I finished another 10 pages, I should have time in the next few days to get to page 24' or whatever ... I just like to know what's going on.)
If you want to look over 1-3 here are links:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=366582
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=366583
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=373530
I'm also looking for advice on the title if you're willing to give it. I thought it was 'funny' when I named it, but it's not a satire, and the title only really fits like the very first chapter ... so I am planning to rename it.
Anywho, feel free to PM me if you would be interested in helping me.
