golfadikt2
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I'm in need of an editor for a story that I believe is too long.
The story is about a group of high school friends that get together to play one of their famed "poker nights" since they are all home from college for the summer.
The brother starts the game, then because the "cute" guy is going to be there, the sister brings all of her friends over and joins the game.
The story contains MM, and a group orgy, and incest (thats the cliffhanger!)
It's 31 pages long in MS Word and I just need to break it up into several parts. I've got other chapters outlined, but am waiting until I get feedback (after I post this) to decide what direction to take the other chapters into....
The story is about a group of high school friends that get together to play one of their famed "poker nights" since they are all home from college for the summer.
The brother starts the game, then because the "cute" guy is going to be there, the sister brings all of her friends over and joins the game.
The story contains MM, and a group orgy, and incest (thats the cliffhanger!)
It's 31 pages long in MS Word and I just need to break it up into several parts. I've got other chapters outlined, but am waiting until I get feedback (after I post this) to decide what direction to take the other chapters into....
