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Longer story, about 40k words, category of erotic couplings and has Mormon/LDS religious undertones.
I'd like an editor, preferably female to comment on the female perspective in the story, but I'm not picky. Moreover, I'm very open to all suggestions, I prefer frank, candid criticism. My past stories have often scored well and earned some praise but more often had logical inconsistencies that drive readers insane, among other issues. I'd like to do cleaner work.
Story is in .doc format.
Thank you, in advance.
I'd like an editor, preferably female to comment on the female perspective in the story, but I'm not picky. Moreover, I'm very open to all suggestions, I prefer frank, candid criticism. My past stories have often scored well and earned some praise but more often had logical inconsistencies that drive readers insane, among other issues. I'd like to do cleaner work.
Story is in .doc format.
Thank you, in advance.
