flawed_ethics
Professional Dufus
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Hello, y'all out there.
I just finished a follow up story to my Christian Loving series. It's 10,000+ words long as it stands, so it's a little beefy, but not the length the original work was. [ edited to add: it's still in draft form, but I'll be giving it a good overhaul 7/20. ]
Whereas CL was primarily Incest, this is NC/Rape (roofies) at heart. There is some straight sex, implied incest and a preggo/lactation fetish scene to boot. The underlying theme lies between the characters Reuben (brother), Dinah (sister), and 'Jude Shechem' (roommate) - a new character.
IMO, this series is character driven. As such, I would like* an editor who would be willing to browse through the CL series and help point out continuity issues between characters, as well as put up with my less than stellar grammar (I'm working at it, but I'll be the first to admit I suck!). I would in addition appreciate feedback as to how it stands by itself.
Also (I know, I'm needy
), the editor must not only be willing to put up with NC and such, but offer a suggestion or two as to how to spice it up - make it more degrading, the emotional trauma that follows, as well as any key issues that stem from rape.
Any questions, please ask! I'd appreciate any help someone would be willing to donate their time. Thanks!
* -- like, but do not require
I just finished a follow up story to my Christian Loving series. It's 10,000+ words long as it stands, so it's a little beefy, but not the length the original work was. [ edited to add: it's still in draft form, but I'll be giving it a good overhaul 7/20. ]
Whereas CL was primarily Incest, this is NC/Rape (roofies) at heart. There is some straight sex, implied incest and a preggo/lactation fetish scene to boot. The underlying theme lies between the characters Reuben (brother), Dinah (sister), and 'Jude Shechem' (roommate) - a new character.
IMO, this series is character driven. As such, I would like* an editor who would be willing to browse through the CL series and help point out continuity issues between characters, as well as put up with my less than stellar grammar (I'm working at it, but I'll be the first to admit I suck!). I would in addition appreciate feedback as to how it stands by itself.
Also (I know, I'm needy
), the editor must not only be willing to put up with NC and such, but offer a suggestion or two as to how to spice it up - make it more degrading, the emotional trauma that follows, as well as any key issues that stem from rape. Any questions, please ask! I'd appreciate any help someone would be willing to donate their time. Thanks!
* -- like, but do not require
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