need an editor for uncle/neice story

[soapiegirl]

I need an editor for a story I just typed out since I wasn't able to sleep tonight. Basic plot: Neice visiting on spring break, catches aunt and uncle together, aunt leaves, uncle and neice get together. I'm looking for very specific and detailed feedback, not just general overview of spelling and grammar (although that is needed, too). Thanks!

 

[KinkyRascal]

Happy to Help!

Soapie,

I'd be happy to help out with detailed comments. Just send it along and I'll get back to you just as quickly as possible!

KR

 

[tallguy220@hotm]

I'm interested.

I need an editor for a story I just typed out since I wasn't able to sleep tonight. Basic plot: Neice visiting on spring break, catches aunt and uncle together, aunt leaves, uncle and neice get together. I'm looking for very specific and detailed feedback, not just general overview of spelling and grammar (although that is needed, too). Thanks!

Hi soapiegirl,
I'd like to read your story, the theme of which is a particular favourite of mine. I will proofread it for spelling, grammar and punctuation. I will also provide you with the specific and detailed feedback that you request on such aspects as: characterisation, plot development, choice of erotic vocabulary, clarity and elegance of expression as well as the overall erotic impact of your story.
If you would care to send me your story as a pm, I will read it and get back to you ASAP. Looking forward to hearing from you,

tallguy220