Voicee
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- Jan 2, 2016
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Hey this is Voicee
Feedbacks and comments tell me I have a good story, but very poor grammar. My story consists of mainly incest however there is lesser erotic horror in 2nd than in 1st part.
Here is my first part https://www.literotica.com/s/demons-force-to-incest
If you are willing to help. Please contact me. I only need grammar editing but I will take your advice If you want to give.
Thank you for your time.
P.s English is my third language. But I don't need a very comprehensive editing
Feedbacks and comments tell me I have a good story, but very poor grammar. My story consists of mainly incest however there is lesser erotic horror in 2nd than in 1st part.
Here is my first part https://www.literotica.com/s/demons-force-to-incest
If you are willing to help. Please contact me. I only need grammar editing but I will take your advice If you want to give.
Thank you for your time.
P.s English is my third language. But I don't need a very comprehensive editing
