W wewey Virgin Joined Oct 10, 2020 Posts 3 Sep 28, 2022 #1 I can run grammarly after you finish. The story is good. Mainly sentence flow can be improved, and adding some fun/humor/style to it might help. Its chapter 2 of my previous story I published last year which got 4.4 stars.
I can run grammarly after you finish. The story is good. Mainly sentence flow can be improved, and adding some fun/humor/style to it might help. Its chapter 2 of my previous story I published last year which got 4.4 stars.
