Need advice from a medic, please....

[Millsy]

Hi all, I'm looking for some advice from a member of the medical fraternity, preferably ER but tbh anybody with expert knowledge will suffice.

It's basically just two paragraphs for an intro to a chapter that need to be checked over for technical accuracy and plausibility and that's it.

If anybody can help I'd be most appreciative of a pm.

Just so's you know I'm not wasting time, it's for the final chapter of a twelve part series that will be submitted to the literotica board upon completion.

My previous work can be browsed by following the link pasted below, so you can see that I'm serious about this.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1118027&page=submissions



As I said, it's just two paragraphs so it won't take too much of your time.

Thank you all in advance.


Ash

 

[SydneyBlake]

You can email me through my contact page, if you haven't heard from a real expert. I might can assist you.

 

[Minalick]

I also work in the medical field. Feel free to pm me the info, if you'd like.

 

[Confi]

I'm a 4th year med-student. I can give it a look.

 

[Millsy]

Thank you all.


Messages sent.



Ash.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Thanks for taking the time to authenticate your story. I'm the same way but not all go to the trouble. Just saying is all. Makes the story more plausible in the end.

Thanks.