Need a little help

[Ironfistvk]

Trying to write a story for one it is very descriptive of the actual act and my main block is woman's point of view. Trying to write it in both view points but being a guy cannt really go into detail how a woman would respond to that particular instance. Posting a sample just so you would get the idea

<male instance>
moving behind her reaches for the bottom of her tshirt and pulling it off her throws it aside, putting his hands on her waist draws her close to him, bends down and kisses her shoulder continuing towards her collarbone, sucking on the bone moves towards her neck, rubbing his face in her hair, kisses and licks her neck before reaching her ear, blowing softly into her ear nibbles her ear lobe

<female instance>
..................

<male instance>
trailing his hands over her stomach plays with her navel tickling it for a bit before reaching towards her breasts, cupping them with both hands runs his thumbs over her nipples weighing them squeezes them gently, curling his fingers inwards trails the flat side of his nails around and over her breasts in circles not touching the nipples, every now and then switches so that the end of the nails are trailing

<female instance>
..................


Would like to see it finished got all the male instances done and if anyone is up to challenge was wondering if they would take it up and maybe post it as dual authors or if not help out. And thankyou for your time for reading the post.

 

[Ironfistvk]

bumpers

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Out of curiosity, why are you writing in two POV's?

 

[Ironfistvk]

trying to not writing because havent written it yet and as to why for the simple reason that no one has done it or I didnt read it after all there are like what a few thousand of them in there???

 

[English Lady]

Aye, one point of view is often enough and if you're comfortable writing the manly bits, just write your story from that POV.

I'm currntly worknig on a story that swaps points of view a few times and it's not something I would normally do, I may still seperate the points of view and go down single viewpoint route. I think, you should go with whats comfortable

 

[Stella_Omega]

In other words; "Because It's There"
A damn good reason!

Good luck... Someone here ought to be interested, I must say!

 

[Ironfistvk]

mmmm not really sure about the comfort thing took it up more like a challenge guess am bored not much to do this sem at school other than to work on my thesis so I guess trying to fill up the gaps lol but thankyou for the input

 

[cobrasangel]

<male instance>
moving behind her reaches for the bottom of her tshirt and pulling it off her throws it aside, putting his hands on her waist draws her close to him, bends down and kisses her shoulder continuing towards her collarbone, sucking on the bone moves towards her neck, rubbing his face in her hair, kisses and licks her neck before reaching her ear, blowing softly into her ear nibbles her ear lobe

<female instance>
feels the chill of being exposed tickle her warm skin, being pulled back against him feels the hardness of him press against her lower back, breathes deeply as warm lips touch her shoulder, sighing as he suckles upon her collarbone, reaches her hands up over her head to encircle his neck, moans softly as his face becomes buried in her hair, holds onto him tighter as his mouth caresses her neck, and then her ear... ..................

<male instance>
trailing his hands over her stomach plays with her navel tickling it for a bit before reaching towards her breasts, cupping them with both hands runs his thumbs over her nipples weighing them squeezes them gently, curling his fingers inwards trails the flat side of his nails around and over her breasts in circles not touching the nipples, every now and then switches so that the end of the nails are trailing

<female instance>
his hands slip down her torso, leaving in its wake goosebumps and a shiver of anticipation, his large hands gather her breasts within them, he strums her achingly hard nipple with his thumb...as he squeezes she gasps softly aloud, his hands tease her breasts, her moans more breathless and quicker than before, as he drags his nails across her breast, she shudders as her urges build in intensity, she grinds her ass into his now throbbing enclosed member
..................

 

[Ironfistvk]

*bows down to her far superior detail skills*

 

[Ironfistvk]

closes this thread. thankyou all for the responses have fun

 

[Norajane]

may i suggest using punctuation and capital letters and paragraphs because its hard to read and the story will probably be rejected