Need a favor

[fieryjen]

I have a story, a little longer than nine MS Word pages, that I wrote a while ago. I got stuck, left it for a while, and now I wrote an ending.

I'm really unsure about this story, because it's different from the stuff I usually write. I don't know whether it's any good, I don't know whether the ending is any good. I don't know what category it should go in or whether it's even appropriate for Lit. If I could get a volunteer or two to read through it and give me their opinion, I would really appreciate it.

There is no explicit sex in it, but it has a mature theme. It's got a bit of a student-teacher theme as well.

So, um, anyone? Please?

 

[fieryjen]

*pouts*

What's a girl got to do to get some help around here? Strip naked? Do the hamster dance??

 

[Stella_Omega]

*pouts*

What's a girl got to do to get some help around here? Strip naked? Do the hamster dance??

Naked is plenty enough!

Can you PM it? or do you need an email addy?

 

[fieryjen]

Naked is plenty enough!

Can you PM it? or do you need an email addy?

I'll email it. Thank you very much!

 

[Belegon]

*pouts*

What's a girl got to do to get some help around here? Strip naked? Do the hamster dance??

Just saw this... and need to concentrate on editing already on my table. But....

can we still get the naked Hamster dance????? Please??? *puppy dog eyes*

 

[fieryjen]

Just saw this... and need to concentrate on editing already on my table. But....

can we still get the naked Hamster dance????? Please??? *puppy dog eyes*

You'd have to supply the liquor.

 

[Salvor-Hardon]

I've got some Crown Royal, some Southern COmfort and my reserve of Maker's Mark at the ready if called upon.

 

[Just-Legal]

Jen - chuck it my way, I'll PM you my e-mail address.

Salvor - MAKERS! Geifgeifgeifgeifgeif!

 

[fieryjen]

Jen - chuck it my way, I'll PM you my e-mail address.

Salvor - MAKERS! Geifgeifgeifgeifgeif!

Done. Thanks

We should get drunk together some time

 

[JamesSD]

I'd also happily take a look if you're still looking for people to do so.

 

[Just-Legal]

Done. Thanks

We should get drunk together some time

We should, however the resultant carnage may disqualify me from leaving my house every again *g*

 

[fieryjen]

I'd also happily take a look if you're still looking for people to do so.

That would be lovely. Could you PM me your email?

 

[fieryjen]

We should, however the resultant carnage may disqualify me from leaving my house every again *g*

That strangely makes it sound even more fun.

 

[Just-Legal]

That strangely makes it sound even more fun.

The fiance looks scared.

This is good.

*evilcackle*

 

[fieryjen]

The fiance looks scared.

This is good.

*evilcackle*

Hehe.

S doesn't, though I wonder why. He's seen me drunk.

 

[rbijon]

I would enjoy reading your story. I am a Communication major, so I may be able to read your work and judge it on it's own merit.
btw.....what ya cooking?