Need a beta reader

[ChibiFangirl]

I'm not the best at grammar or dirty talk. I'm also afraid that my story has unnecessary detail since its very long. So I need a second opinion?

 

[The_Ghost_Man]

I'm not the best at grammar or dirty talk. I'm also afraid that my story has unnecessary detail since its very long. So I need a second opinion?

What category is it, and how long is very long?

 

[ChibiFangirl]

What category is it, and how long is very long?

Group Sex and thirteen pages.

 

[sr71plt]

Afraid "pages" conveys nothing. Wordage to page varies widely from program to program and is changeable within programs. What's the wordage?

 

[ChibiFangirl]

Afraid "pages" conveys nothing. Wordage to page varies widely from program to program and is changeable within programs. What's the wordage?

Google Drive

 

[The_Ghost_Man]

Group Sex and thirteen pages.

That sounds achievable. Are you looking for someone to proofread or edit?

 

[ChibiFangirl]

That sounds achievable. Are you looking for someone to proofread or edit?

A bit of both. My grammar is god awful and I'm worried that the dioluage may be a little off.

 

[The_Ghost_Man]

A bit of both. My grammar is god awful and I'm worried that the dioluage may be a little off.

And I'm not sure that your spelling is too hot either.

Flick it over if you like, and I'll take a look. My email is in my profile.