Nastiest Feedback

[Boxlicker101]

What was the nastiest feedback you ever got. Of course, it would be anonymous. The flames always are. I think this is my worst:

Would accuse you of plagarism
06/15/05 By: Anonymous
Would accuse you of plagarism IF YOU COULD ACTUALLY WRITE. It is such a bore to read these stupid stories of the "always married" guy wanting to be queer. That is BULL!
Why don't you write a real story about troubled souls who became gay because they were molested as kids. You know tell the truth once in awhile!
Is always amazing seeing groupies needing to be led by idiot writers just to give them some self esteem.
You should be so ashamed not to even submit such foul.

I don't know what anon wanted to add at the end. "Garbage", I suppose or something like that.

 

[Quiet_Cool]

What was the nastiest feedback you ever got. Of course, it would be anonymous. The flames always are. I think this is my worst:

Would accuse you of plagarism
06/15/05 By: Anonymous
Would accuse you of plagarism IF YOU COULD ACTUALLY WRITE. It is such a bore to read these stupid stories of the "always married" guy wanting to be queer. That is BULL!
Why don't you write a real story about troubled souls who became gay because they were molested as kids. You know tell the truth once in awhile!
Is always amazing seeing groupies needing to be led by idiot writers just to give them some self esteem.
You should be so ashamed not to even submit such foul.

I don't know what anon wanted to add at the end. "Garbage", I suppose or something like that.

Interesting. I didn't realize all gays were molested as children.

The problem with anonymous feedback is that they fail to leave thier names, so we cna ask them how to write. That would solve everything.

Q_C

 

[Guest]

On an essay I recently submitted under an Alt. ID on the ten commandments.

Sacrilegious
06/04/05 by Anonymous in UK
I will pray for your sorry ass.

 

[Guest]

Got this on my newest posted story...

online snuggling?????
06/19/05 By: Anonymous
Talk about your lack of intimacy both in writing and in life. Online snuggling???? Must be real romantic like wet sheets at 20 below.
Your stories all lack any semblance of intimacy which probably means why you turned to writing as in real life you are incapable of it. Now that your secret is out, do all of us a favor and get counselling.

Umm... yeah... when I'm writing stroke, I really pay attention to intimacy and romance.

 

[cloudy]

"Road kill is more appealing than this story."

The only reason it doesn't bother me in the least is because the same feedback was left on virtually every one of my submissions after I pissed off one of the godly righteous with my "Myth of Religious Freedom" essay.

*shrug*

He was amusing, proving my point for me so perfectly without even realizing it.

 

[BlackShanglan]

"DEATH TO ALL POOFS."

How can you take a death threat seriously when the author uses the word "poof"?

 

[Liar]

"DEATH TO ALL POOFS."

How can you take a death threat seriously when the author uses the word "poof"?

*snigger*

I got "Get your sorry ass off my porn site!" on a non erotic poem. For some reason I don't think either of the peeps that can really claim this porn site to be theirs wrote it.

#L

 

[CharleyH]

I received an essay about me, not my writing, which only goes to show how miserable that person was. I expect he has offed himself by now, and if not, I suspect someone else has done it for him.

 

[cheerful_deviant]

My nastiest was an accusation of plagarism by another author on Lit, (not in the AH) saying I had copied him. One sentance was similar.... out of a 15,000 word story, ONE sentance. Then I find out that his story was submittes 3 months AFTER mine.

When I pointed this out to him (he actually left an email addy) he said it was posted on some other website (that I, nor anyone else had ever heard of) and I must have gotten it form there. But I couldn't read his stuff there anymore to verify this because he had to stop posting there for "technical reasons".

Hence the birth of my first troll.

 

[Dinsmore]

Why not submit a story intended to be trolled?

I'm seriously thinking of submitting a story about two incredibly unattractive people who have nothing but bad sex, get audited by the IRS, have their favorite pets die, have chronic body odor, have no friends and are dispised by all that know them just to see how bad the unsigned comments can be.

I'm working on one now that has no social redeeming value. Maybe I should submit it as a Loving Wives story. I was planning to turn it in the end into real romance but it might be more fun to just let it fly.

 

[R. Richard]

"DEATH TO ALL POOFS."

How can you take a death threat seriously when the author uses the word "poof"?

Well, "Stop me before I kill more!" always gets my attention.

 

[Penelope Street]

I received an essay about me, not my writing, which only goes to show how miserable that person was. I expect he has offed himself by now, and if not, I suspect someone else has done it for him.

If it is the person I'm thinking of, we can only hope.

I've received some negative comments, but I can't say I've ever felt any of them were "nasty". Maybe because they were just too damned funny!

Take Care,
Penny

 

[matriarch]

One told me I was a...." stupid fucking cunt.....and this was not porn. Stupid fucking cunt.".......at least 'he' was consistent.

Another: "The writing is detached and lacking expression. Both of you need an honest editor to educate you on trying to pull at least something of literature out of you."....this on my collaborative story with Kitten.

and......"...Finished PRETENDING to be a writer, I mean? Leave writing to people who can grasp the nuances of voice and grammar. Stick to reading your gothic romances, please? " on 'Pain Relief'.

Most of my negative bitches seem to infer that I can't write. I prefer to listen to those who think I can.

 

[LadyJeanne]

I'm seriously thinking of submitting a story about two incredibly unattractive people who have nothing but bad sex, get audited by the IRS, have their favorite pets die, have chronic body odor, have no friends and are dispised by all that know them just to see how bad the unsigned comments can be.

Ok, but make sure he cames on her fase...

I'm working on one now that has no social redeeming value. Maybe I should submit it as a Loving Wives story. I was planning to turn it in the end into real romance but it might be more fun to just let it fly.

As long as she gets pregnant, you'll be fine...

 

[cloudy]

Ok, but make sure he cames on her fase...

as long as he kiks down the door first.

As long as she gets pregnant, you'll be fine...

and her husband kills the guy that gets her pregnant.

 

[Quiet_Cool]

See, that's the problem. My stoires don't get basic feedback. In fact, I think the only PCs I've gotten have been from AHers. And the majority of my e-mail Feedback has been from people who are... well, literate.

I need a nice stalker troll to give me something to laugh at.

Oh, and thanx to the AHers who've commented on my work, or even just read and/or voted. It is much appreciated. It just isn't as fun when you know what the hell you're talking about.



Q_C

 

[Dinsmore]

How I love unsigned comments!

Ok, but make sure he cums on her face...

No, I'm thinking that he is unable to cum---as is she. But they really love each other...isn't that important?
As long as she gets pregnant, you'll be fine...

She thinks she pregnant, but it's really just a huge hernia...but they never cheat on each other...isn't that healthy?

 

[Quillman]

Loving wives

Have had my usual share of my stories descibed as shit' etc ... but having also posted in the 'loving wives' section, I continue to be amazed (but perhaps should not be) at the vitriol that writers in this section attract for those brave enough to post feedback sites. These self styled zealots regularly, and mostly anonymously, castigate any character or writer who has allowed his wife to stray, and heaven forbid that he should be in the least aroused by this. The irony ... that they actually read them in the first place! Comments on the construction of the actual stories are virtually non existent; tearing the guts out of the writer seems fair sport it seems.

The mind is very complex indeed!

Oh and if any of them are reading this ... whilst some stories may well be true, I suspect that most, like my own are fiction. Did you hear that guys, fiction!

 

[Dinsmore]

Yada, yada yada...

as long as he kicks down the door first.

But only if he is wearing a Darth Vader outfit...with PFMPs to match.


and her husband kills the guy that gets her pregnant.

Who happens to be his evil twin---sister.

 

[velvetpie]

I had some guy keep writing me, telling me that all gays should die. Just kept saying it over and over like the deranged asshole he was. I hate people like that.

 

[sachiaiko]

My Nastiest feedback was a few months ago.

Comments:

you are a female and write gay stories??????? what the hell do you know about gay men, write about something else your stories suck big time


It made me laugh - since most of my gay male stories are 4.70 and above and i get feedback weekly about how they made people cry they were so beautiful. Heh

Nikki

 

[Guest]

 

[Boxlicker101]

I will never forget being told that my reverse striptease story was "the written equivalent of a kick in the balls--I just lost my erection."

It made me wonder why someone would be browsing the humor section for stroke...

I enjoyed that story, Jammies. I didn't find it very erotic but it was funny.

The first post on this thread wasn't the only nasty feedback I ever got. These two came in on the same story on the same day.

No enjoyment
02/23/05 By: Anonymous
If writing this story disgusted you with its repugnant portrayal of callous manipulation and betrayal of trust, then yes, I did enjoy it as much. Regardless of her eventual feelings, how could I enjoy descriptions of a slimeball having sex?

Delete the above comment.

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Two days is a row?
02/22/05 By: Anonymous in USA
OMG, yesterday it was Stepdaddy's Little Slut Ch. 02 by Sexxy Vixen, today this one. Two stories, with the same EXACT plot. What, did you two get together and tried to see who would post it first?

I know originality it often lacking here, but this is ridiculous.

I thought that second one was unfair because my story wasn't really all that much like the Vixen's. This was in the Incest section, by the way, not Loving Wives like it might sound like.

 

[BlackShanglan]

OK ... This is not so much nasty as just baffling.

Sie ist die Abstrakten
excellence, in it's purest form... sort of...

 

[cheerful_deviant]

OK ... This is not so much nasty as just baffling.

What a wonderful feedback... kindof...