annaswirls
Pointy?
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Can you name the author of this poem in 6 lines?
I had Lauren check my math
Which of these usual suspects do you think wrote this lovely, alliterated piece of verse?
Pick, comment if you would like and vote while the votin's good.
need more, more below.....scrollscroll scroll
DARCPIX'S
Kundalinguini
JC Street
jthserra
Tathagata
Toward A Word
I embrace her sting
I beg for more
opiate caress
blurred glimpses
of glistening flesh
stone walls
damp
as if sweating
candles throw dervish shadows
enrapt audience of ghosts
watch my submission
burnt leather and sacred oils
and a thousand flames
applaud her victory......
and she smiles
sated and satisfied
and feeds me scraps
of my broken ego
which i gladly devour
off her still flushed hand
I had Lauren check my math
Which of these usual suspects do you think wrote this lovely, alliterated piece of verse?
Pick, comment if you would like and vote while the votin's good.
and she smiles
sated and satisfied
and feeds me scraps
of my broken ego
which i gladly devour
off her still flushed hand
need more, more below.....scrollscroll scroll
DARCPIX'S
Kundalinguini
JC Street
jthserra
Tathagata
Toward A Word
I embrace her sting
I beg for more
opiate caress
blurred glimpses
of glistening flesh
stone walls
damp
as if sweating
candles throw dervish shadows
enrapt audience of ghosts
watch my submission
burnt leather and sacred oils
and a thousand flames
applaud her victory......
and she smiles
sated and satisfied
and feeds me scraps
of my broken ego
which i gladly devour
off her still flushed hand
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