Mystery Screw

[mythtrav16]

This is a weird idea that might be stupid, but what the hey, I'll post it anyway...

Suppose you write an erotic story, but style it as a mystery/crime novel. Basically have an investigator trying to figure out who the players were in a specfic sexual encounter.

The easiest way to do this would be to have a pregnant woman and then have the investigator trying to figure out who knocked her up. Essentially, the methodology would be the same as a murder investigation - medical science allows you to backdate to when the event in question occurred, and then all you have to do is figure out who was with the subject at that specific moment.

Of course there are some problems with this idea, such as the fact that DNA could easilly establish paternity, thus making a lengthy investigation pointless. Also, why would anyone besides the woman care who she slept with?

One way of doing this is to have a woman discover that a single mother who works at her husband's company has a young son who bears a striking resemblance to her husband. The wife can't force the other woman to submit he son's DNA for testing, and she can't publicly talk about her suspicions, so she hires a P.I. to trace back who the single mother concieved the child with.

Another way you could do it is to have a woman wake up in a hospital bed with a large belly after a six month coma, following a car accident. She can't remember the last few months before the crash and her friends and family don't know of any significant men who were in her life at that time. So she hires a P.I. to establish who fathered her baby.


I'm swamped ATM, so this is as far as I go with this idea. Anyone else who wants to explore it is more than welcome to.

 

[Sinny]

Hmmm. I can see some potential with a pregnant woman scenario when the father was some unknown fuck at a swingers party. And especially if he was one of 10 men she fucked at that party. Maybe establish the woman as seeking the identity of one of 10 possible fathers (very Jerry Springer, no?), as opposed to knowing his identity and simply locating the father? There are possibilities, too, with the waking up pregnant scenario.

 

[fourinches]

Maybe it isn't a cop or detective and instead, it's a friend of the pregnant lady? Maybe she wants to take matters into her own hands by either being really jealous or curious. She goes around and interviews people to find their where-abouts when she got pregnant. This would involve a few blowjobs/handjobs? She could collect some clues like what kind of dick her friend likes. Let's say her friend likes really curvy ones- So, she'd pinpoint a few possible guys. And have to have sex with them. The first guy would be going on forever without cumming and she would later find out that he was born with the innability to. The next guy maybe has a really straight and thick cock, but she decides she needs to suck on it anyways. Then, she would finally find the father because he'd have a really strong, curved one.
Of course, you can change up the ideas because this is just a collection of examples...

Oh, and I just thought that it could be a nice idea for her friend to think back about when they had a lesbian encounter together- She expressed what kinds of sex toys she liked and the way she liked to be penitrated.

 

[Naamari]

/\ Nice process there.

Or maybe just set it a few decades ago before testing? A roaring twenties take of a hazy night at the speakeasy? At the same time that would bring certain facets of society at large into play, like conservative values, sex outside marriage, race, etc.

 

[JRaven]

I kinda like fourinches take.

So far as the testing goes, it only proves or disproves a guy. You can't just test every man in the city to see if he's the father. You still have to come up with probable cause. The PI could deduce that a certain guy probably had sex with her. He/She would ask if he'd want to be tested. The ones that knew they weren't the father would agree. Some would object because then their DNA would be on file and they have other paternal, criminal issues. Of course, the ones that think they may have fathered the kid would object would their own pathetic reasons.

The general idea is pretty good. Otherwise, "Law and Order: SVU" wouldn't have lasted as long on TV. Although, I don't think Mythrav16's idea involved any kind of rape.

Jenny

 

[zex95966]

I like this idea, A sexystery. backtracking all the possible sex suspects sounds fun.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

This reminds me of an idea I have offered from time to time:

There are two couples who organise "Murder Weekends". One couple act as the organisers and one of the other couple, who masquerade as participants, is always the murderer. Couples alternate and sometimes the wife or sometimes the husband is the murderer, etc. etc. etc.

They decide to have a "Rape Weekend."

Wife of organiser comes into room of one participating couple while husband is in bar.

She explains that, just as there is no real murder at a "Murder Weekend" there is no actual rape at a "Rape Weekend". However, rape victims can be questioned, while murder victims cannot. Therefore, to make it real, a man will come into her room in a few minutes and tear her night-dress and generally be obnoxious, but will not actually harm her. This is all voluntary, explains the organising wife.

Woman says OK and curtains are drawn to darken room and woman gets into bed.

Build tension a little here by making her wait and give her thoughts.

Man comes in and ... fake rape scene from there!

Maybe she lets him shag her, "for realism"?
Maybe she panics and fights for real and he leaves bruises?
Maybe she panics and fights for real and he actually rapes her?

Husband's reaction could be good/bad.

Maybe the organiser's wife says the same thing to more than one?

Maybe the others try to solve it and get turned on and various "meetings" happen?

 

[JRaven]

Good idea there Snooper, but I do see a few flaws.
There needs to be more than just the two couples. Otherwise, it would naturally be the husband of the other couple.
On the other hand, it could be one of the wives.
I like the idea of her spending the rest of the evening in the torn night shirt, one boob hanging out.
Not too keen on it being an actual rape. When they solved the "mystery", every one would know who really raped her. I'm guessing husband organizer would know the play is going to play out, so he'd know who the rapist is before the rape.

Maybe she lets him shag her, "for realism"?
Of course, this IS Literotica!

Maybe she panics and fights for real and he leaves bruises?
And then he gets no nookie?!? Come on, this IS Literotica!

Maybe she panics and fights for real and he actually rapes her?
Of course, it was her own husband. He felt he had the right to screw his own wife. When she finds out it was him, she's upset with herself for fighting him off.

My two pence worth...
Four couples. Each person takes a written part at random. The four women go to their rooms, the men go outside to "chat". At X o'clock, the first man goes inside for fifteen minutes, then comes out. The second man goes inside for fifteen minutes. At Y o'clock, all four men have been inside for fifteen minutes. The woman "raped" comes out screaming per her part. One of the men had the part that told him to go into bedroom 2 and "rape" the woman.

Okay, maybe only a pence and a half...

Jenny