My verses

ramyanetgrrl · Jan 13, 2015

Trixareforkids · Jan 13, 2015

Hi Ramya!

I can't wait to go through them all later, if I find some inspiration I'll post the resulting piece(s) here. Our styles are quite different so the contrast could be fun.

Senna Jawa · Jan 14, 2015

ramyanetgrrl said:
hi everyone! and a big hi to trixareforkids!
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http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=64233267#post64233267

Ramya, you start your post with:

Originally Posted by MinisterOfFuck View Post
Ladies: Have you ever fantasized about fucking your priest or pastor?

So you write what is expected, I read what is expected, and it's like you got your assignment, then your teacher gave you C+, and you're happy, you fulfilled your obligation. Except that this is not poetry.

Loosen up. You got your assignment but you don't have to be a slave of your assignment. You may use it as a background, as a pretext, as something that provides you roughly with a topic,.... When you're a poet then you always have to write poetry, not assignments. You have to have a real reason to write a poem, not just a pretext.

Good luck. best regards,

ramyanetgrrl · Jan 14, 2015

Senna Jawa said:
Ramya, you start your post with:

Originally Posted by MinisterOfFuck View Post
Ladies: Have you ever fantasized about fucking your priest or pastor?

So you write what is expected, I read what is expected, and it's like you got your assignment, then your teacher gave you C+, and you're happy, you fulfilled your obligation. Except that this is not poetry.

Loosen up. You got your assignment but you don't have to be a slave of your assignment. You may use it as a background, as a pretext, as something that provides you roughly with a topic,.... When you're a poet then you always have to write poetry, not assignments. You have to have a real reason to write a poem, not just a pretext.

Good luck. best regards,

thanks for reading! and taking the time to say something about it!

I'll be the first one to say nothing I have written here can quite be considered poetry. I read a post, and if the urge strikes me, I write whatever verse I can in 3 minutes or less. Sometimes I cheat and take 4.

so a c+ is really too kind.

poetry is beyond me, I write short verses like this merely to amuse myself. if that does not meet this forum's requirements, my sincere apologies.

Ramya

Trixareforkids · Jan 14, 2015

ramyanetgrrl said:
poetry is beyond me, I write short verses like this merely to amuse myself. if that does not meet this forum's requirements, my sincere apologies.

Ramya

No way! Don't apologize for doing something you enjoy. Poetry DOES NOT have to be serious or studiously studied. If you're enjoying what you do and are happy with the verses you pen off the top of your head, please, keep them coming.

I enjoy your light verses!

If you are happy with your quick works, don't let the advice of others inhibit you or keep you from posting here. Not every poet wants to be a "student" of poetry, some just do it for fun. Writing and sharing here is not limited to the students of poetry. We tend to inspire one another, so the more the merrier!

Senna Jawa · Jan 15, 2015

ramyanetgrrl said:
poetry is beyond me, [...]

No, don't give up!

if that does not meet this forum's requirements, my sincere apologies.

Ramya, don't worry about the forum either. Nine out of ten I'd write the same about the poems on PF&D, and most of the time even much worse (so, most of the time I say nothing

).

Best,

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ramyanetgrrl

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Trixareforkids

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