My two new stories.

[Sim8425]

Hello folks of Chyoo. I started two new stories. Check them out and maybe leave feedback.

12 Hours until Doomsday

12 hours or shall I say threads until the world or shall I say story ends.

A Faery Tale

A swordsman befriends a small creature in an RPG-like tale.

Sim8425

 

[jakelyon]

Interesting

Both stories are interesting and definitely more challenging than most of the stories here. The faery story could be fun with spells to make her bigger, maybe too big?, jealousy on her part if he does it with human women, hmm what could a faery do to get even?

The doomsday story will be even tougher as the tight time frame, and dark theme makes it hard to come up with a plot line right out of the shoot. I will have to give that some thought.

Nice work all around though. Hope they get approved soon.

 

[Sim8425]

My new stories have been approved. I'd like to thank those writers who stuck around CHYOO and made it better with their dedication. I'd like to thank the new mods for approving my stories.

I hope the stories will get some attention now. Thanks.