My story

[Guest]

I am the author of "Arizona Family in '69" and would like to know if, as I am hoping, the story line has some appeal for female readers. I tried to take the perspective of each of the actors, so to speak, particularly that of Teri, the wife-mother. Please post your reply on this bulletin board. Thank you.

 

[Guest]

WOW!!! Im not a female, but may I say I think people are going to be talking about this story for a long time. Im pretty sure we are all going to want the next chapter as soon as possible. Dont worry about your story writing techniques, I think they were great. You have definately inspired me to finish both of my unfinished stories.THANK YOU!

[This message has been edited by bigbuck (edited 10-20-1999).]

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[Guest]

Thanks BigBuck, I really appreciate the positive evaluation. I think the story would appeal to some women too, but I'm still waiting to find out.

 

[Guest]

To newanon

I just wanted to tell you that I think your Taboo Theatre story is sooooo hot! I absolutely love the whole seduction setup that the father inititates. All those little details are so important to so many women. I get wet at the very beginning when the father lays out the "special clothing" for his daughter to wear. And the paragraph close to the end with the father and daughter kissing (and, well, you know) is the single most erotic passage I have ever read. Wow. Please keep writing. I want more.

 

[BadLilGirl420]

NewAnon-- You rule

I am a female and just wanted to say I love your stories, especially Arizona Family 69'. Your writings never fail to get me wet. Thanks for all the nights of great sex, after reading I just had to get some!!