My story

guitman05

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Hi everyone. This is my first post at the forums here, and I just want to advertise a thread I am working on. I'm working on a thread right now because, after being a long time user of litetorica.com, I want to write a story that more personally embodies the fantasies I sometimes have. Right now, the story is not diverse at all, but I have many plans for this thread, which will hopefully someday contain erotica based on many of my different fantasies.

So, I am writing this post hopefully to draw people for three reasons. First is for people to point out my stupid English mistakes. I am a math and science type of person, and I have always found English to be very challenging, so I am sure naturally there are mistakes I have made grammatically and with spelling. The second is for other writers. Just from reading things here and there I have noticed for the most part not many people are on chyoo, and I just want to say that if you write a thread for my story, the only way I would deny it is if it absolutely in no way adds anything (such as a thread thats says "Then he grabbed a woman and screwed her..." and thats all) or if it alludes to something illegal (underage sex). The third group I am hoping to find are simply others who share fantasies like me, to simply stop by and read and leave feedback, let me know what you did and didn't like. Thanks!

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/3440

Oh, and if this is on the wrong board, I'm really sorry. I'm not trying to post disruptively or annoy other members.
 
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Good Start

You are in a fine spot on the boards. WE are not too picky in the Chyoo section anyway.

I read the story and really like the idea. The only thing I don't understand is why he was depressed in high school. I would have been happy as hell to pull off a bunch of stuff using the power he has.

In any event I think it is a great story start. It will be fun to see where it goes.

:D
 
What I like most about it is that it has build up. I know that you're building a lot of potential story paths for yourself.
 
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