My story of a new adventure,,,,what do you think ???

[fungirl911]

I walked into the hotel room, feeling a little nervous and excited. Tonight was the night my dream of a fantasy of two men was going to cum true. J was with me and we were meeting M and it was about to become an adventure of a lifetime !!!
I had talked to both men about this, but had never done anything like this.....nothing so open, so wild and so sexy !!!
I greeted M with a deep long wet kiss, J's hands were on my hips, standing close behind me. I was so full of anticipation my knees were weak. I turned to J and thanked him with a deep wet kiss......looking deep in his eyes, knowing he wanted this for me, just as much as I wanted it!!! I reached down and behind me, feeling both cocks growing hard in their pants.
I can feel hands on my tits, and squeezing my tits. My shirt is lifted over my head and my skirt is pulled to the floor. Each one has a tit and is beginning to lick and suck them. There's a finger teasing my lips, I grow wetter. There's a tingle throughout me......
A hand slides down my hip and softly rubs my ass cheek. Slipping in between to tickle my ass. There's a stirring around the opening of my cunt and a finger slides in.......I moan in pleasure. My head goes back, and I close my eyes. A warm tongue glides across my clit, I can feel the warm wetness. I can feel two fingers slide into me, working their way in and out going faster and faster.......I gasp as my ass gets licked also. Just when I'm almost ready to cum I feel a finger slide into my ass. I'm overcome with lust. Fuck me with your fingers I cry out, make me cum. In and out to of my holes are being overtaken.........I try and concentrate on the hard cocks, one in each hand.......but i'm loosing control. I rub and pull just a little faster and my knees buckle, and I shudder as I cum. I can feel it take over my body and I loose control and loose all sense of reason. I can feel myself cumming, I'm shaking all over and there's a warm, wetness running down my thigh, as two tongues eagerly lick my body.
J sits on the bed and I undress him.....lost in an orgasminc haze. His cock is at full attention and I bend over and take it in mouth. I can taste the pre-cum, as it slides across my tongue, flicking back and forth, filling my throat. I caress his balls, as M whispers to me, "suck his cock, lick his balls...that's it!". One by one I take each ball and suck them into my mouth.......they are smooth and warm. My tongue licks every part of him, reaching his taint and teasing his ass. I hear him moan in pleasure. M can't take it anymore and buries his face into my ass, darting his tongue in and out of my tight hole. Taking his thumb and rubbing my g-spot. Pulling my lips apart he slide a finger from each hand into my cunt, then two from each. I'm stretched, being finger fucked and my ass licked. He continues to lick sliding four fingers into me and his thumb is rubbing hard on my clit............here comes another one.....'I'm going to cum again" J forces his cock down my throat, and I loose my breath as I cum. I fall to me knees.......He reaches down, pulls me up kisses me hard anand spins me around.
I pull M close, kiss him hard and fast, he pulls my face into him and fills my mouth with his tongue. Our lips are mashed together and his tongue deep in my throat, tasting of my sweet pussy juices. I grab his cock, I take is balls in my other hand and swallow his cock. He fucks my throat furiously. Telling me how good my lips feel on his cock. J is watching and waiting to taste my pussy. He sits below be and i sit on his tongue. He feverishly licks my clit......I'm going to cum again..........I go up and down on M even faster.........I cum once more. I have to taste his kiss warm with my juices.
I'm told it's time for a treat for being so kind to their cocks. I get up onto the bed on all fours. M has a faraway look in his eyes, and reaches into his bag. He smothers my ass and pussy with cheery lube and pulls out a toy and slides it into my cunt.......he tells J to use it one me and do it good and hard..........he's sure it's what I will like. M then whispers to me that he wants to use a new toy on my ass.....he pulls out a twisty butt-plug, and presses against my tight hole. I can feel the pressure as he slowly slides it in. With each push I feel myself relax and it slides in. I can feel the ripples as my hole goes relaxed and then tenses around it as each ridge fills me. J holds the toy still until I begin to beg to be fucked. He pushes down just the right way, I can't cath my breath, my head is spinning and M is wiggle and gently fucking my ass. Just as I an overcum by yet another orgasm, J pulls out the toy I shake and fall to the side and my legs are soaked my my cum. I can feel both hands rubbing my cum all over my pussy and ass. I begin to breath and they start again, but switch toys. I feel the butt-plug forced into me by J, I gasp with a sort of pleasure pain. He holds it there and M fucking me hard and fast.......it almost hurts and I pull away, relax and bit and let him fuck me with an almost insane vengence........I'm their dirty little slut.........and I'm loving every minute of it. Before I know it I'm cumming, flooding the bed, and J hold me down to keep me from twisting and turning, and M foces the dildo into me again.........I'm cumming so much I can't control the flow and with each thrust he pulls out and more cums out.
With only a second to catch my breathe J pulls me on top of him, my back to him, and I slide onto his cock............rising just enough to get it wet, he lifts me and slides into my ass. I'm leaning backawrds just a bit, and M rubs my clit. Somehow he manages to get too where he can slide his willing cock into my cunt. I can feel both cocks inside me, rubbing together with only a slight bit of skin to separate them. I can barely get my hand don to rub their balls at the same time. I know the are both about to cum, I stop and roll over. I want M in my ass now. I turn and slide my soaked cunt onto his cock and lean forward, look back at M fuck my ass now". He leans in, but to my surprise I feel it slide into my pussy. Both cocks are rubbing together and stuffing my cunt beyond belief. He pulls out and slams his dick into my ass, I scream out........I'l so fucking lost, I don't care who hears me !!! I'm getting fucked hard and fast, I hear their moans............they tense up and I feel hot cum begin to fill my cunt and ass..................
I want to taste their cum. I pull away, their cocks are touching and I take them both in my mouth. They are still cumming and it's all over my mouth, tongue and chin. I look to each of them and see the sweet bliss in their eyes. I collapse between them and can't believe it just happened.........
I drift off to sleep.......only to be awakened by their fingers and tongues all over me once again.

 

[Guest]

yuck.

 

[fungirl911]

yuck.

Well seeing from your past replies to other people ( never nice ) your opinion means nothing to me........

I didn't claim to be a writer, just wanted to share my story.

 

[doppelbock22000]

hello dear writer,
just found this, and I like it, has a personal touch, everything can be polished, but heck it certainly is stimulating. I like to write too, the difference you have the courage to post it, thank you. Hope to catch you out here..take care, Henry

 

[Boratus]

why here?

I'm just wondering why you posted the story here and not where stories are supposed to go.

It was a nice scene. Nothing new but for a beginner I'd have to say good work. The one thing that annoyed me were the names J and M. Is it so hard to pick two actually names?

The spelling and grammar seemed to deteriorate as the story progressed as though the author was having trouble focusing on the writing. I had this amusing imagine of your typing as the scene was going on.

 

[G-string_Vixen]

This story needs to be polished but it does have quite a sexy quality to it.

 

[Mindy Maxon]

Good Job

Very good job it definetly puts the image in a persons mind. I agree it does need to be fixed up a little bit but I really enjoyed it! Good luck.

 

[fungirl911]

Very good job it definetly puts the image in a persons mind. I agree it does need to be fixed up a little bit but I really enjoyed it! Good luck.

All it was, was a fantasy...........thanks for the comments and seeing it like i did..............yes, i'm no writer..............but it was FUN to actually make a fantasy like that come true.

 

[kbate]

I had a minute and basically felt like playing with a story, so I cleaned it up a little (and that is what follows). It still could use a rewrite to make it flow and to look for any remaining physically difficult to see positions. I would prefer to see the men named, even if only Joe and Moe. It is a little crude and basic but is not a bad first story.
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I walked into the hotel room, feeling a little nervous but excited; tonight was the night my fantasy of being with two men was going to come true. J came in with me and M was already in the room. It was to be the adventure of a lifetime.

I had talked to both men about this but had never done anything like it, so open, so wild and so sexy. I greeted M with a deep wet kiss, J was standing close behind me with his hands on my hips. I was so full of anticipation my knees were weak. I turned to J and thanked him with a kiss. I looked into his eyes, knowing he wanted this for me, just as much as I wanted it. I reached down and behind me, feeling both cocks growing hard in their pants.

I felt hands squeezing my tits; my shirt was lifted over my head and my skirt pulled to the floor. Each man takes one tit and begins licking and sucking on it. A finger begins teasing my lips, making me wetter. A tingle runs through my entire body.

A hand slides down my hip and rubs my ass cheek. It slips in between and tickles my anus. A stirring at the opening of cunt is followed by a finger sliding in. I moan in pleasure; my head falls back and I close my eyes. A warm tongue glides across my clit, I can feel the warm wetness. I feel two fingers slide into me, working their way in and out moving faster and faster.

I gasp as a tongue licks my ass. I am about to cum when I feel a finger slide into my ass. I am overcome with lust. "Fuck me with your fingers," I cry out, "make me cum."

I try to concentrate on the hard cocks, one in each hand but I am losing control. I rub and pull just a little faster but my knees buckle as I cum with a shudder. I feel it take over my body and I loose control and lose all sense of reason. I feel myself cumming, I am shaking all over and a warm, wetness runs down my thigh. Two tongues continue licking my body.

J sits on the bed and I undress him. His cock is at full attention and I bend over and take it in my mouth. I taste his pre-cum as his cock slides across my tongue, flicking back and forth, filling my throat. I caress his balls, as M whispers to me, "suck his cock, lick his balls, that's it."

One by one I suck each ball into my mouth, they are smooth and warm. My tongue licks every part of him, reaching his taint and teasing his ass. I hear him moan with pleasure. M can not take it any longer and buries his face in my ass, his tongue darting in and out of my tight hole.

M uses his thumb to rub my g-spot. He pulls my lips apart and slides a a finger of each hand into my cunt, then two from each hand. He continues to lick my ass and continues sliding four fingers into my cunt while his thumbs rub my clit and g-spot.

Here comes another one, "I'm going to cum again!"

I lose my breath as I cum. I fall to my knees and J reaches down, pulls me up and kisses me hard. He spins me around and I kiss M hard and fast. He holds my head and fills my mouth with his tongue. Our lips mash together and I taste my pussy juices on his tongue.

I grab his cock, I take his balls in my other hand and swallow his cock. He fucks my throat furiously, telling me how good my lips feel on his cock. J watches and waits to taste my pussy. He slips below and his tongue slips into my pussy. I am going to cum again and I begin to go up and down on M's cock even faster. I cuu once more.

I am told it is time for a treat, a reward for being so kind to their cocks. I climb onto the bed and get on all fours. M has a faraway look in his eyes, and reaches into his bag. He smothers my ass and pussy with cheery lube and pulls out a toy and slides it into my cunt. He tells J to use it on me and to do it good and hard; he's sure it is what I will like.

M then whispers to me that he wants to use a new toy on my ass; he pulls out a twisty butt-plug and presses it against my tight hole. I can feel the pressure as he slowly slides it in. With each push I feel myself relax and it slips in further. I can feel the ripples as my hole relaxes and then tenses around it as each ridge fills me.

J holds the toy still until I start begging to be fucked. He pushes it down just the right way; I can't catch my breath, my head is spinning and M is wiggling the butt plug in my ass. Just as I am overcome by yet another orgasm, J pulls the toy out of my pussy. I shake and fall to my side, my pussy and legs soaked with my cum. I feel both pairs hands rubbing my cum all over my pussy and ass as I begin to breathe again.

They start again but switch toys; I feel the butt-plug forced into me by J, I gasp with a sort of pleasure pain. He holds it in me and M starts fucking me hard and fast with the dildo in my cunt. It hurts and I pull away, relax a bit and let him fuck me with an almost insane vengence. I am their dirty little slut and I am loving every minute of it.

Before I know it I am cumming again, flooding the bed. J holds me down to keep me from twisting and turning, and M foces the dildo into me again. I'm cumming so much I can't control the flow and with each thrust he pulls out and more cums out.

Allowing me only a second to catch my breath, J pulls me on top of him, my back toward him and I slide onto his cock. He moves just enough to get it wet then lifts me and slides his cock into my ass. I am leaning backawrds just a bit, and M rubs my clit. Somehow he manages to get to a position which lets him slide his cock into my cunt. I feel both cocks inside me, rubbing together with only a slight bit of skin separating them. I can barely get my hand don to rub their balls at the same time.

I know the are both about to cum, I stop and roll over pulling both cocks out. Looking back at M, I say, "Fuck my ass now."

He leans forward but to my surprise I feel both cocks slide into my pussy, stuffing my cunt beyond belief. M pulls out and slams his dick into my ass, I scream out. I'm so fucking lost, I don't care who hears me. I'm getting fucked hard and fast, I hear their moans, they tense up and I feel hot cum begin to fill my cunt and ass.

I want to taste their cum. I pull away, their cocks are touching and I take them both in my mouth. They are still cumming and it is all over my mouth, tongue and chin. I look at each of them and see the sweet bliss reflected in their eyes. I collapse between them and can't believe what just happened.

I drift into sleep only to be awakened by their fingers and tongues all over me once again.

 

[pattijoe]

great stuff

Help! I am an M and I have a wife, W. We are trying to put together an MMF and getting excited just talking about it. From a man's point, it would be great to see my wife just get so satisfied by 2 or more men, and my involvement of joining in and/or watching is totally erotic. I would just love to see my wife suck someone else's cock, and be serviced by two men at the same time.
Any suggestions?

I walked into the hotel room, feeling a little nervous and excited. Tonight was the night my dream of a fantasy of two men was going to cum true. J was with me and we were meeting M and it was about to become an adventure of a lifetime !!!
I had talked to both men about this, but had never done anything like this.....nothing so open, so wild and so sexy !!!
I greeted M with a deep long wet kiss, J's hands were on my hips, standing close behind me. I was so full of anticipation my knees were weak. I turned to J and thanked him with a deep wet kiss......looking deep in his eyes, knowing he wanted this for me, just as much as I wanted it!!! I reached down and behind me, feeling both cocks growing hard in their pants.
I can feel hands on my tits, and squeezing my tits. My shirt is lifted over my head and my skirt is pulled to the floor. Each one has a tit and is beginning to lick and suck them. There's a finger teasing my lips, I grow wetter. There's a tingle throughout me......
A hand slides down my hip and softly rubs my ass cheek. Slipping in between to tickle my ass. There's a stirring around the opening of my cunt and a finger slides in.......I moan in pleasure. My head goes back, and I close my eyes. A warm tongue glides across my clit, I can feel the warm wetness. I can feel two fingers slide into me, working their way in and out going faster and faster.......I gasp as my ass gets licked also. Just when I'm almost ready to cum I feel a finger slide into my ass. I'm overcome with lust. Fuck me with your fingers I cry out, make me cum. In and out to of my holes are being overtaken.........I try and concentrate on the hard cocks, one in each hand.......but i'm loosing control. I rub and pull just a little faster and my knees buckle, and I shudder as I cum. I can feel it take over my body and I loose control and loose all sense of reason. I can feel myself cumming, I'm shaking all over and there's a warm, wetness running down my thigh, as two tongues eagerly lick my body.
J sits on the bed and I undress him.....lost in an orgasminc haze. His cock is at full attention and I bend over and take it in mouth. I can taste the pre-cum, as it slides across my tongue, flicking back and forth, filling my throat. I caress his balls, as M whispers to me, "suck his cock, lick his balls...that's it!". One by one I take each ball and suck them into my mouth.......they are smooth and warm. My tongue licks every part of him, reaching his taint and teasing his ass. I hear him moan in pleasure. M can't take it anymore and buries his face into my ass, darting his tongue in and out of my tight hole. Taking his thumb and rubbing my g-spot. Pulling my lips apart he slide a finger from each hand into my cunt, then two from each. I'm stretched, being finger fucked and my ass licked. He continues to lick sliding four fingers into me and his thumb is rubbing hard on my clit............here comes another one.....'I'm going to cum again" J forces his cock down my throat, and I loose my breath as I cum. I fall to me knees.......He reaches down, pulls me up kisses me hard anand spins me around.
I pull M close, kiss him hard and fast, he pulls my face into him and fills my mouth with his tongue. Our lips are mashed together and his tongue deep in my throat, tasting of my sweet pussy juices. I grab his cock, I take is balls in my other hand and swallow his cock. He fucks my throat furiously. Telling me how good my lips feel on his cock. J is watching and waiting to taste my pussy. He sits below be and i sit on his tongue. He feverishly licks my clit......I'm going to cum again..........I go up and down on M even faster.........I cum once more. I have to taste his kiss warm with my juices.
I'm told it's time for a treat for being so kind to their cocks. I get up onto the bed on all fours. M has a faraway look in his eyes, and reaches into his bag. He smothers my ass and pussy with cheery lube and pulls out a toy and slides it into my cunt.......he tells J to use it one me and do it good and hard..........he's sure it's what I will like. M then whispers to me that he wants to use a new toy on my ass.....he pulls out a twisty butt-plug, and presses against my tight hole. I can feel the pressure as he slowly slides it in. With each push I feel myself relax and it slides in. I can feel the ripples as my hole goes relaxed and then tenses around it as each ridge fills me. J holds the toy still until I begin to beg to be fucked. He pushes down just the right way, I can't cath my breath, my head is spinning and M is wiggle and gently fucking my ass. Just as I an overcum by yet another orgasm, J pulls out the toy I shake and fall to the side and my legs are soaked my my cum. I can feel both hands rubbing my cum all over my pussy and ass. I begin to breath and they start again, but switch toys. I feel the butt-plug forced into me by J, I gasp with a sort of pleasure pain. He holds it there and M fucking me hard and fast.......it almost hurts and I pull away, relax and bit and let him fuck me with an almost insane vengence........I'm their dirty little slut.........and I'm loving every minute of it. Before I know it I'm cumming, flooding the bed, and J hold me down to keep me from twisting and turning, and M foces the dildo into me again.........I'm cumming so much I can't control the flow and with each thrust he pulls out and more cums out.
With only a second to catch my breathe J pulls me on top of him, my back to him, and I slide onto his cock............rising just enough to get it wet, he lifts me and slides into my ass. I'm leaning backawrds just a bit, and M rubs my clit. Somehow he manages to get too where he can slide his willing cock into my cunt. I can feel both cocks inside me, rubbing together with only a slight bit of skin to separate them. I can barely get my hand don to rub their balls at the same time. I know the are both about to cum, I stop and roll over. I want M in my ass now. I turn and slide my soaked cunt onto his cock and lean forward, look back at M fuck my ass now". He leans in, but to my surprise I feel it slide into my pussy. Both cocks are rubbing together and stuffing my cunt beyond belief. He pulls out and slams his dick into my ass, I scream out........I'l so fucking lost, I don't care who hears me !!! I'm getting fucked hard and fast, I hear their moans............they tense up and I feel hot cum begin to fill my cunt and ass..................
I want to taste their cum. I pull away, their cocks are touching and I take them both in my mouth. They are still cumming and it's all over my mouth, tongue and chin. I look to each of them and see the sweet bliss in their eyes. I collapse between them and can't believe it just happened.........
I drift off to sleep.......only to be awakened by their fingers and tongues all over me once again.

 

[PacifistKitty]

i think it was good

well i am new here fungirl911 and well i wish i had people that would give me good replies or something

L8rz
PacifistKitty

 

[fungirl911]

mmf

Help! I am an M and I have a wife, W. We are trying to put together an MMF and getting excited just talking about it. From a man's point, it would be great to see my wife just get so satisfied by 2 or more men, and my involvement of joining in and/or watching is totally erotic. I would just love to see my wife suck someone else's cock, and be serviced by two men at the same time.
Any suggestions?

The main thing is you both have to be comfortable with what's going to happen........and someone she likes or is curious about sexually.

We've done it only 2 times ........ and both men, at the time, were guys I had messed around with before, without my hubby.
Good luck!!!

From a womans side, it's amazing to be the center of attention......

 

[Doctor Joe]

The main thing is you both have to be comfortable with what's going to happen........and someone she likes or is curious about sexually.

We've done it only 2 times ........ and both men, at the time, were guys I had messed around with before, without my hubby.
Good luck!!!

From a womans side, it's amazing to be the center of attention......

I'd love to join you and make you the center of attention once again fungirl. Where are you from and how often do you have these HOT fantasies?

 

[bobocity]

I don't want to pick you up, but I do have thoughts about the story.

Moving back to the story...

You've gotta work out the formatting issues for a start. This is an impenetrable block of text.

You also have to get rid of these...........

There's hotness in your story, but unfortunately, there's need for a major editing job here.

The tricky bit about writing erotica (he said, having finished three whole stories and working on another...) is that while it SHOULD get you hot, you have to be able to step back from it and edit it just like it was something completely non-erotic.

Tricky balance to strike.

BBcity.