My Story Idea

[Story_Maker]

Hey ppl, got a few ideas for a story, but Im awful at writing and need some help either with ideas, or with the actual writing itself..
Ok basics are:
Main Girl, 18 called Nicki, can be year above, just that general age.
Going to be a gangrape, she starts off serving a few guys then one of the guys takes her to the local hangouts.
Any ideas people, suggestions, alteratons, anything, please reply
Thanks
Story Maker.


age edited per forum guidelines

 

[Alice_In_Chains]

Well, I think the girl should be of the age of 18.

How bout she is a groupie and she is going to be gang raped by the drunken band?

 

[sirhugs]

Well, I think the girl should be of the age of 18.

How bout she is a groupie and she is going to be gang raped by the drunken band?

groupie stories are a mainstay of the celebrity category. As a twist, how about the guys take her to meet the band as a setup for the nerdy guys she never treated right at school getting revenge?

 

[deliciously_naughty]

Just a reminder...Laurel won't greenlight a story if it feautures anyone under the age of 18 for legal reasons.

 

[sirhugs]

Just a reminder...Laurel won't greenlight a story if it feautures anyone under the age of 18 for legal reasons.

I saw Alice point that out. In my variation, the girl needs to be at the end of high school , or of college, so the guys have had years to build up resentment of her being a tease.

 

[Story_Maker]

18

Just read guide lines, just found out bout the 18 rule, it doesnt matter really, like the band idea ppl, keep it coming...so to speak

 

[Alice_In_Chains]

groupie stories are a mainstay of the celebrity category. As a twist, how about the guys take her to meet the band as a setup for the nerdy guys she never treated right at school getting revenge?

AHHH that sounds like a good twist to it. Shall there be any Ultra-violence.

Seriously sirhugs I think you and I should start up a story together .

 

[sirhugs]

AHHH that sounds like a good twist to it. Shall there be any Ultra-violence.

Seriously sirhugs I think you and I should start up a story together .

check your PMs dawlin'

 

[Story_Maker]

Ultra Violence? Not sure, need more ideas ppl, got the basics, Im thinking girl (18 of course), gets chatted up by a geek, she spurns him, then he says he has back stage tickets to see the band. This is while the main band are on a break. She is led backstage into another, smaller arena full of all the people she treated badly. They screw her, heavily, no one can hear her over sound of concert. Word gets round to all the other guys in the audience and they screw her too....not sure how to round it off, or even to continue it...Even if you think this idea sucks tell me, I need help.
Story Maker
P.S, thinking maybe after this she is a slave..something like that neways

 

[Chicklet]

Okay, so the smallish group of guys screws her, and she turns out to be insatiable. She needs more, and laughing, this group of guys goes out to find her some satisfaction. What if they take her into the audience (keeping close eyes on her so she doesn't get away) and watch her as she begs (at their command) for other guys to fuck her. They could point out people, maybe people they think she wouldn't want to screw around with under any other occasion, and tell her to beg him, and she pleads with the guys to go in back with her.