My story ATONEMENT!

[SmedleyLeftwich]

I've started a chapter story here called Atonement! it's listed in the alphabetical, I'm interested in feedback and suggestions on how to make it something I can survive on while I write... I don't expect to get rich, just need to live or something. I think you'll find it well written and tasteful, while still stretching limits and borders, especially as the chapters go on. Chapters A-B are posted (together). I am trying to to BE a writer, but am frustrated that having to live as something else is getting in the way of the writing.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=462610