My second attempt at writing needs assistance

[BlueFlame6178]

Hey everyone! I'm making a second attempt at a loving wife story. My first one was as expected, not very good. I do enjoy writing on the subject but I also want to get better at it.

I need some help on character building, dialect and story flow. If you have time and are willing to help, please contact me.

 

[ontheroadforever]

Hey everyone! I'm making a second attempt at a loving wife story. My first one was as expected, not very good. I do enjoy writing on the subject but I also want to get better at it.

I need some help on character building, dialect and story flow. If you have time and are willing to help, please contact me.

I can help, but I won't write it for you. All I can do is suggest things, maybe show you a tip or two to help.