My psychotic girlfriend.

RPMate

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Story genre: Romance/horror/comedy

~~~Prologue~~~​

Thunder strikes from over head and the sound of heavy rain encircles a high school students house. The house is as dark as it is outside and not a single light is on with the exception of one small feeble flashlight that is located within a closet.

Within the closet frantic scribbling can be heard as a young teenage boy writes in his journal to help calm himself down as blood drips slowly from his shoulder from an opened wound.

"I don't know what happened."The boy writes in his journal. "At first I was just a normal high school student just trying to get by in the world when suddenly my entire life was turned upside down. It all happened..when I met that girl..." The boy flinches in fear as he hears the sound of something hitting the floor from downstairs.

"That girl is my girlfriend..and...I think she is trying to kill me."
The sound of soft foot steps can be heard coming up the stairs and the teenage boy has a harder time breathing as he tries to hold his breath out of fear of being heard.

"At first I thought it was amazing that I was finally able to find a cute girlfriend but this is definitly not what I wanted or how I pictured a boyfriend/girlfriend relationship was supposed to be."
The sound of his bed room door is heard opening slowly.

"I really shouldn't have tried to break up with her and now she's gone crazy.
I tried calling the police but she's already cut off all communication with the outside world. The hell is wrong with her!."


The sound of light breathing can be heard from the other side of his closet.

"I'm really sorry mother, father. If any of you or anyone else finds this please know that it was my girlfriend who did this and is probably responsible for all the other deaths too! So please avenge my death!"


With a loud slam the closet door opens and the boy turns fearfully towards his greatest fear. Backing up slowly he suddenly finds his back against the wall and now has no where else to run. Before him stands the girlfriend of his dreams who in return smiles warmly at him with a butchers cleaver in her right hand.

"There you are <3 "
She says with a sweet and innocent voice which is quickly followed by the teenage boy's scream.

~~~~End prolog~~~~​

(OOC)

Alright this should be fun. :devil:
Looking for a girl to the play the part of a cute,timid,low self esteemed, teenage girl who has a very dark past and twisted side to her.

Your free to choose out how your character looks but remember we're looking for a girl that looks cute and naive, a person you would never expect to be messed up on the inside.

Here's some example pictures.
Cute girl 1
Cute girl 2
Cute Girl 3

Crazy mode pictures for the girls (warning some blood) .

Crazy 1
Crazy 2
Crazy 3

PM me if your interested or have any questions or idea's that you would like to see happen within the story. Once the position is filled I'll fill in all the blanks of the story and we'll begin. Also just to get it out of the way, yes it'll be a sexual role play and none of the main characters will die in this story. :p It will definitly have a unique ending.

Edit- Oh yeah here's my character. I'm also pretty excited about this thread so if no one joins in soon I'll just start playing the girl myself while making her extremely generic without description until someone dose join.


Inspiration- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U7FGaFrGFL8&feature=related
 
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A few months eariler

Chapter 1
"The Fate that brought us togeather"​

"ugghhh I hate school" Darrick proclaimed loudly after the final bell had rung. Him and his friends where now heading to their lockers to get there stuff and head home.

"hee hee maybe you wouldn't hate school so much if you actually applied yourself to it, instead of goofing around like an idiot."
A female student friend said. The girl's name was Gabby and she had dark brown shoulder length hair and matching brown eyes. She was the athletic sort but was quite smart or at least she was compared to Darrick. Standing off to Darrick's left side she had a bag slung over her shoulder that was filled with her tennis equipment and books.

"Ha ha, she has a point man. Besides, no girl is going to want to go out with you if your all looks and no brains."
His second best friend said who was off to his right. The boys name was Alex and to anyone that knew him he was the playboy type who enjoyed chasing after girls. Alex had blond hair with red eyes and stood just a bit taller then Darrick at a height of 6'1".

"Yeah yeah I hear you." Darrick grumbled as he reached his locker. Darrick was a handsome teenager having short black hair and dark brown eyes. He was an overall average person with most of his skills being in sports like track and soccer. Where he excelled in sports though he lacked in concentration and so his school studies suffered the most. Unlike other students however whenever Darrick put his mind to something he was able to accomplish anything and all his friends knew this.

I could always help you study you know? Gabby offered but Darrick was quick to shoot her down.

"Nah that's alright. I know how busy you are. Besides this is my problem so I'll deal with it."
He said while pulling his jacket out.

Shrugging off his response both Gabby and Alex got there stuff out and they all started towards the exit doors.
Once outside Darrick stretched his arms and happily jumped down the first set of stairs leading away from the high school. "Alright let's go! I'm feeling hungry. How about we stop by a restaurant or something?" Darrick said, however he was stopped suddenly as both his friends looked away from him and spoke up.

"Ah...sorry...I actually have some after school activities I need to do."
Gabby said first while then giving an apologetic expression to Darrick.
"Sorry man, I'm also going to be busy too. Got myself a possible date tonight so I'll see ya around pal." Alex then said which made Darrick's eariler smile fall.
"What? well that blows."He said with a heavy sigh to himself.
As the three of them waved their goodbyes Darrick deiced to just head home for the day and headed towards the main gate.

Passing the main gate of the school Darrick suddenly felt something wet hit the top of his head.
"hmm?" Looking up Darrick could see dark heavy clouds starting to cover the sky.

"Crap..looks like it might rain." He thought and he started to quicken his pace.

~~~~5 min later~~~~


The rain was coming down hard now. So hard that Darrick was already soaked from head to toe. "The hell...the weather man didn't say anything about any rain." Darrick swore out loud as he ran from cover to cover. His house was just barely within walking distance of the school and while it was nice that he could walk to school without worry of missing a bus he hated it when it rained like this. Lucky for him however in order to get to his home he had to pass through the market and he could take cover under the shops front tarps.

Out of breath from running, Darrick came to a stop at a random shops tarp.
"man..it's really raining hard.." He said out loud to no one in particular. Waiting for his breath to come back he started to look around and found it odd that the street was surprisingly empty. "Probably because of the heavy rain" Darrick thought but then his eyes caught sight of another person, a girl.

She was just standing there on the sidewalk, seeming completely oblivious to the heavy rain that fell and soaked her school uniform that Darrick recognized as another nearby high schools. Her face was down cast and he couldn't see her face hidden beneath her wet hair.

"uhh well that's strange.." He thought and then he heard the sound of an approaching car, a speeding car. Just as the red sports car came into view Darrick saw the girl start to move forward. She was walking right into the street!

"huh? hey look out!"
He shouted but she didn't seem to hear or be listening to him. He quickly glanced back to the sports car and the car showed no indication that it was slowing down or was going to stop, even it if did at this point it would be too late.

"LOOK OUT!" He shouted again and this time he was dashing off in her direction. Putting all his strength into his legs and feet Darrick threw himself out into the middle of the street of the oncoming car and in a single motion tackled the strange girl.

In a flash the two of them became air born and with a heavy thud they landed on the sidewalk just as the red sports car zoomed past them with it's horn blaring, and just as quickly as the car had come it was gone.

"ouch..ouch..ouch.."
Darrick mumbled out loud to himself. He then quickly picked himself up off the girl. "You dumb ass watch where your go.." He stopped in mid sentence as he realized the girls shirt had become slightly see through from the rain and he could see her bra.
A slight blush fell over his face then but it quickly vanished as he also realized that the girl had scratches and bandages all along her arms and legs.

"umm are you okay?" He asked lightly with a hint of concern in his voice.
 
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"This is it" she hears the sports car race around the corner.She steps forward hearing someone call out to her the world slows as she see's her death quickly approching."I have to do this"She say's "It the only way" a sad smile play's on her lips.She would soon be free.Next thing she knows shes flying back on to the pavement .She lands in a heep on the ground.Then she opens her eyes."You?"her blue hair lay out in all directions around her."Why"she says tears welling up from her purple eyes.
 
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"huh why?" Darrick said repeating her question and arching an eyebrow at her strange response.

"Are you really that clueless? You where about to get hit by that crazy car driver. I couldn't just stand by and do nothing."
Darrick said while standing up completely, at a height of 5'10.

Darrick gave a heavy sigh. "Jeeze what a pain.., first I get turned down by my friends and now this...hmm?" Looking down he finally had a chance to really look at the girls face and while she did seem a bit clueless he had to admit she had a very cute face and attractive if not smoking body.
His male mind quickly snapped back to reality however as he noticed she was starting to tear up.

"uh wait wait, why are you crying?" he said while waving his hands in front of him. He really wasn't good with crying girls.
 
She laid there crying for what seemed like hours. Finaly she sit's up wipeing her eyes"Why did you interfere"she ask's in a meek voice. She struggles to her feet standing she's about 5'7 her hair clinging to her face in places." Sighing at her change of fate. "Who are you anyway" she says with a bit of boldness stepping up to see him more clearly.
 
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"Why did you interfere?" She asked

Again with the weird questions..did this girl get hit in the head when he tackled her? Darrick had to wonder.

"uhh what do you mean interfere with? You mean you didn't want to be saved?"
Darrick couldn't understand this girl, was she trying to say she wanted to die? No that couldn't be it that would just be plain stupid, he thought.

"umm in any case..." He said trying to change the subject, since it seemed their conversation wasn't going anywhere. For some strange reason his mind was telling him to get away from this girl, she was cute and all but something about her was off if not kind of scary.

"You should probably get out of this rain before you catch a cold or something. Should probably get some rest too."
He said while looking her over. The only thing she was wearing was her school uniform which was completely soaked through and somewhat see through. Not being a guy to abandon a girl in such a state he couldn't just allow her to walk home like that

Taking off his jacket he then offered it to her.
"Here take this, I have another at home so go ahead and take it. Should help you stay somewhat dry."

"Oh, and my names Darrick by the way."
 
She looks at him"is that for me"she takes the jacket looking at it with love. She looks up there are tears in her eyes.She smiles widely"my name is Jade."She puts it on blushing deeply "thankyou for the jacket" she stand there looking at him smileing." I should thankyou but i don't have anything to give you."
 
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I should thank you but i don't have anything to give you."

"ahh.. umm don't mention it." Darrick said shyly while scratching the side of his cheek. This girl really was still cute, especially when she looked at him like that with those large doe eyes.

"Anyway, take care of yourself Jade and umm bye."
He said with a smile and then started to hurry away. As he ran however he couldn't help but to feel as if her eyes where bearing down on him and he could of swore he heard her start to whisper his name over and over again.

Must of just been his imagination.
 
She watches him run off and follows him to his house. She had no where else to go anyway she could'ent go home she was afraid to be in that house.Her parents used to beat her and degeade her in that house there was no love or kindness at all.Him she would do anything for him he had shown her kindness. As they reach the house standing alittle ways away from the house looking at him.The rain had let up some and you could see her clearly just standing there."I will do any thing for him"
 
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Darrick rushed home quickly, he had to since now he was without a jacket and he found that the rain was a lot colder without one.

Damn his weakness for cute girls he thought, but it couldn't be helped.

Moving quickly it wasn't long before Darrick could see his house in the distance and he gave a sigh of relief for finally getting home and out of this rain. His home was a simple one. A small white house with two floors and two bathrooms. It had a garage on the right side of the house, and on the inside it had four bedrooms, a living room, family room, kitchen and a laundry room.

Reaching the front door Darrick stopped to catch his breath before pushing his way inside. Once inside he quickly glanced down the hall and into the kitchen but after seeing no one he then glanced to his left to look into the living room.
"Mom, Dad I'm home!" He shouted as he tried looking to his right and up the stairs that lead to the second floor.

After a few moments of silence he shrugged figuring that two of them where out as usual and finished taking off his shoes. Moving down the hall way and into the kitchen he then passed into the family room, where the laundry room was adjacent too.

Inside the laundry room he removed his soaked black shirt and tossed it into the dryer. He then reached for a nearby towel and proceeded to ruffle his short black hair into a scrambled mess. Not caring to comb it he let the towel rest on his shoulders as he moved back into the kitchen where he opened the fridge to pull out a carton of orange juice. Pouring himself a glass he then moved over to the kitchen table and sat down on a wooden seats. Leaning back Eric reached for the T.V remote that was on a nearby counter and turned on the T.V that was across in the living room.

With a flash the T.V came to life, and Darrick heard the news play, with the news lady talking about the unexpected shower storm. Seeing that nothing else would be on at this time Darrick simply left the channel as it is and started to drink his orange juice.

Yes, this was a common routine for him, and even though a few strange things happened to him today, like the rain and the girl, at least he was able to enjoy relaxing at home with a nice tall glass of OJ like he always did.

Finishing his drink Darrick stretched his arms with a loud yawn.
Ugh..may as well take a nap or something now Darrick thought. No use doing anything else in this rain storm.

Moving from the kitchen Darrick started to make his way towards the stairs but suddenly stopped as something caught his eye.

thump thump

Standing near the front door of his house, Darrick could see out the window and standing there in the middle of the rain was...that girl..

It was the same girl from eariler. The very girl from which he had saved from that reckless driver...but..

Why was she here now? did she follow him?

Not entirely cretin if he was just seeing things. Darrick moved towards the front door and opened it.

thump thump

Sure enough it was her! Darrick could even see the jacket he had given her.

For an extremely long moment there was nothing but awkward silence between the two of them and it wasn't until Darrick finally clear his throat did the silence break.

"umm what are you doing here?" He asked while looking very confused.
 
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For a long moment all i could do was stand there with the cold rain caressing me" I...don't have a home to go to" Her eyes fall to the muddy ground, her voice distant."You...saved me earlier and i wanted to thank you somehow..." Jade then said weakly, her lip slightly trembled and shivered slightly from the cold.
 
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Listening to Jade's reason Darrick gave a loud sigh to show his annoyance.

"ughh..I thought I told you to forget about that...sheesh..you sure are thick headed."
He said with a frown. Slowly peaking his head out the door and looking up, Darrick could see that the sky was still heavily with rain clouds and it probably wasn't going to let up for a long while longer. Sighing he finally gave in to his conscious of helping the poor school girl.

With another heavy sigh he then looked back down at Jade. "Alright, alright, you can come in for now..at least until the storms over...afterwords though your going to have to leave, else my parents are going to come home and get the wrong idea if they see us togeather." Pushing the door further open he allowed Jade passage into his house.

"There's a laundry room up ahead and to your left with some towels to help dry you off. And I guess if you really need to you can wince out your cloths upstairs over the tub. The bathroom up there is just to your right when you reach the top."
He said with a frown. He couldn't believe he was letting this complete stranger into his house, but then again what guy wouldn't let a cute girl in?
 
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She walk up the stairs to the bathroom looking at the pictures on the wall as she goes. As she reaches the bathroom looking down both sides of the hall memorizing every. Comeing across a picture of Derrick looking around she takes it and puts it in her pocket. Entering the room she remove her clothe and rings them out she see some of his clothes. Grabing them and holding them loveingly she put them on she walks out and back down stairs to the living room.Sitting down Jade begins to watch t.v. with Darrick.
 
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