My next story is now in LIT....

[Vivacia]

This is just a message to all those that have read Fire and Ice, and those that haven't too I guess...

My next story is now on Lit - it isn't a romance like the last, it is titled Forbidden Pleasures - it would mean alot if some of you took the time to read it (and maybe Fire and Ice if you haven't already) and told me what you think...

The links to both are on the botton of my posts
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[MrKinkMaster]

Your story was well written. I always find it interesting when a person composes a story from the other sex's point of view. You did a very good job at that part. It is also nice to see someone writing about a person that doesn't have to be a rock hard stud or a stunning goddess. Everyday people have fantasies too.
Good job!

 

[Impetus]

I liked fire and Ice better, but I'm just a sucker for Romance.

I liked the story, but I found myself wondering several times just how close their houses were to each other. That's a pretty significant ammount of detail to be seen from a cross a road.

The english slang caught me sideways a few times too. Fondling his bollocks? Turning off the mains? I had to blink a few times and read it twice.

Asside from those minor quibbles, though, it was a really nice story with enough twist and kink to make it really hot. Solid.

-I